| "Convalescence" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 16:14 CDT
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That was your first Fanfic?! I hardly believe that! It was absolutely beautiful! Perfection!! not to mention incredibly hott!! Great job!!! I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simpfan06 On: July 05, 2004 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job, especially for your first one. This is one of the best one-shots I have read. Also, your choice of words was excellent, it made the fic more fun to read. I loved it!
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Title: Nice story!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome My boyfirend thanx you for your good lemon! Love Demonicslayer GothgirlVA@aol.com
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH!! hella tight! god, i love the lemon. lol
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Title: good?
Reviewed By: kikyo killer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um.... err.....good!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 03:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
§¤ Wow. Lol that was a GREAT lemon :D Meaning, I really liked this fic!!! I would of thought Koga would be gentler with the person he intended to make his mate... so If he ever decided to get together with Ayame, I kinda feel back for her lol BUT this is still an awsome one-shot :D ¤§ §¤§ Silver Moon Dragon §¤§
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word, only one word can describe how good this is: Perfect.
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amasing.you have got to turn this into the begining of a full story wow that was great.
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Reviewed By: EbilJo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 17:34 CDT
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You're gonna continue it, right?! I'll pitch in ice cream, LoveLorn! C'mon! Ice cream and cookies? Who could resist the tempation? It's just so cute and fuzzy. If you don't continue, I'll be forced to take drastic measures (such as taking all the sugar FOR MYSELF!). Meh, just PLEASE continue!
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Title: opps
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 11:54 CDT
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sry bout my mistype ****songo....... sey bout that i'm bad at typing !!!!! and i'm spelling is horrable ... well continue please!
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Title: continue please
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 11:50 CDT
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i am i'm total aggance with spyrofate and Rukusho100 ... i think u should continue no matter if it was just a one-shot continue i'll be ur #1 fan and i'll give u a COOKIE if u continue!!!! come one a COOKIE no one can resist the almighty COOKIE!!! ^^ i'm sure u will do great if u continue this fanfic i kno i will enjoy reading every last bit !!!! ^~ please continue dont leave me hanging with out a continuance i mean if u continue and u wright bout them telling songe and miroku then have her pregnante and then going to have the baby .... but where will they live if u ever plan on continuing then give me an e-mail at (lovebug248@kiwibox.com) again please continue i really wanna find out what happens and what koga thinks of them together and all that stuff !!!!!!!!!!!!!! come one a COOKIE i kno u can't resist a COOKIE no one can!!!!!!!!!! or if i'm on then IM SexySammers06.....,,,,, pleace out
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesum fanfic! very nice lemon! i congratulate yu!...uhm...about the continuing idea...i tink yu shood leave it at that...cuz thats wut one shots are basically for...but hey if yu wana then yu wana...wutever floats yur boat....anyway...awesum lemon!
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Reviewed By: Rukusho100 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Kawii! I do agree with the last reviwer! You should continue...it would make a great story with tons of fluffy and lemmony goodness i bet!
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Title: my compliments
Reviewed By: spyrofate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY.....VERY.....VERY NICE!!!!!!!! lol. That was a truly awesome fic, and I would suggest continuing it actually into a story about their new lives, spreading the news to the others (Sango, Miroku, etc.), when Kagome's pregnant, etc... I know VERY well that their are quite a few of those already, but somehow I KNOW that YOU could make this just...an INCREDIBLE story!!!!!! I see no reason for you to stop here. I can already see the AMAZING amount of reviews you'll get if this were to be continued!! This little bit itself was just........FANTASTIC!!!! IMAGINE WHAT YOU COULD DO IF YOU CONTINUE!! THINK OF HOW MANY REVIEWS AND FANS YOU'LL HAVE!!!! IF YOU WANT......I'LL HELP YOU! LOL. I'll say this much, to impress ME.....ME.......this much, is incredible, and I would encourage you to see what you can really do to this. I think others would agree with me once they read this!! In the mean time, AWESOME JOB!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 01:15 CDT
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That was really sweet. I think it has to be the most romantic lemon I've ever read. Great job!
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