| "Sugar and Spice Series" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: pana99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2021 17:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't believe I came across this delicious fic from 17 years ago...
Amazing how this pairing has existed so early on and I just found
out about it this year lol. But I'm so glad I did. I am proud to
have dug out a treasure like this and found so many people loved
this pairing and still do actually! Thankfully, the ship still
sails steadily. I thank you for writing such an enjoyable fic and
keep it archived so those who loved it can read it again. And even
those who haven't can read it too.
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Reviewed By: Creirdyddlydd [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 11:42 PST
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As much as I love the story (which is tons I assure you) I almost love the end more! It's hard to find well-done silliness without being over-the-top. And you've done that fantastically. The KakaIru is love and I hope our dear academy teacher gets his turn to dominate. The poor man seems to always be bottom. *sigh* Anyway, on to the next chapter! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: snorchberi On: September 26, 2006 09:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mind blowing. I really enjoyed it. *Goes to take a cold shower* Can you send those clones to my place?
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Title: A fanfic classic
Reviewed By: ~*Nessie-chan*~ On: July 25, 2006 04:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Out of my profile, forgeten my password :P) Screw the best Kakashi/Iruka fic, this is BY FAR the best Naruto fanfic on the site! It rocks SO HARD! Kakashi is such a kinky shinobi and Iruka is a closet perv. The characters are not at all OOC and I loved the game- i got the X2 and SGU ones but I never realised that AU standed for Audience! That was a hard one! You are beyond legendary. This work is AWESOME ~*Nessie-chan*~ (Shinobi-sensei lover)
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Title: not that kinky!!!
Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil NSIl On: March 08, 2006 16:49 PST
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C'mon! make a kinkier yaoi fic!! (NO INCEST) But this was hawt
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Title: Phuaaa~~~
Reviewed By: Metal_Moon On: August 05, 2005 12:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
M-...m-...muaaahhhhhhhh~~~ *melts into a pile of fangirl goo* That was amazing! *The* best KakaIru yaoi I've seen yet~ KI is one of my alltime favorite pairings, and to see them doing so many kinky and fwuffy things...X3 *evil cackle* I'm all shivers! Your writing style is magnificent as well. I love the little commentary with the other characters! XD "You all are as straight as a box of slinkies.." *cracks up* Superb job!
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Reviewed By: gackt On: June 28, 2005 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best iruka/kakashi fics i've read yet!
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Reviewed By: flooby_153 On: May 26, 2005 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhh sorry about the previous spelling and grammar rating, I got you mixed up with another fanfic I'm reading. Gomen~~
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Reviewed By: flooby_153 On: May 26, 2005 03:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was just so GREAT and funny!! As yes, I did find the audience very surprising and kinky, well done XD
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Reviewed By: NarutoLover#? On: April 19, 2005 18:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! *spazzes* I love this fic!!! It ROCKS!!! ^^ I'm a big fan of the Kakashi/Iruka pairing -- they are just sooooooo kawaii, not to mention perfect for each other, ne? ^___~ It's really nice to find a good fic about the two of them (surprisingly, there aren't that many out there.....it really is sad... *sigh*) Oh, and I love the way you mixed the "fluff" and "kink" in this one.....you really pulled it off quite nicely! Yup, yup. So well, in fact, that there is now a new "yaoi category": it is affectionately called "flink". Or "kuff". But I like "flink" better... ^___~ Okay, fine, I admit it: it's late. No, actually, it's not that late......I'm just sick and doped up on meds. XP I hate being sick............ ^^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Oh, and I think that you should stop after the next chapter (unless you come up with a reeeeeally good idea, at which time I'm not going to complain any, lol).....you know, one last "fling" after they've admitted that they love each other.(well, one more that -we- know of... ^___~ ) That, and it sounds cool: a "flink fling", where flink is flung everywhere!!! Whoot!!! ^___~ *mutters: Okay, okay, I'm going to bed!!! Sheesh!!! You men in white coats are soooooo impatient!!!* ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: lillithdv8 On: March 04, 2005 19:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and the rating isnt enough. I SO LOVE YOUR FIC, amazing you had me drooling/laughing/nosebleeding all the way. WHOAAAAAA, I love this paring, and your stories are real fun. I dont think I've read a clone story yet so bravo for being original (I also dont get round the sasunaru fics its just disturbing to know they're 13 but who knows if they're a lil older maybe...) back to the fic, I was laughing my ass out at the SGU. PLEAAAAAAAAASE write more, loooooove your fic can have enough of this pairing. Suggestions? how about a duel/competition where both kakashi and iruka have to use dirty jutsus on each other?/ or making out in school (not original/ but works though)/ both getting on a mission to protect the crew making the ichaicha movie and getting inspired?/etc
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Reviewed By: Cim26 On: February 05, 2005 20:55 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW very kinky, i love it! Haha. I never liked KakaxIru fan fics, but this was like WOW. I really hope you do continue after the 4th chapter--almost hoping it doesnt end. It'll be sad when it does. I cant find this story on FF.net so i'm guessing ANBU here.
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Reviewed By: jo On: October 09, 2004 23:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... that was amazing. that had to be the best, most detailed lemon i have ever read! and the part after it!! that had to be the sweetest part!! i absolutely loved that!!! please write more!! i especially loved how they both were like "it's not just about the sex" because true love between two people that are so obviously meant for each other is so touching it hurts to even think about it!!! i mean, can you imagine loving a person that much that they would give up everything that they had worked all their lives for! please! you have to write more!! i love this story so much it would be a crime for you to stop because there are not enough stories like this! ok, i'm running out of the words i'm allowed... i'm currently at 767!!! yay!! please write more!! i want more lemons!!
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Reviewed By: jo On: September 30, 2004 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay for kakairu lemony goodness!!!! i want another chapter please!!!! sorry but i don't have any ideas for you... but you could have kakashi use kinky little toys! on iruka and/or himself!!! i'm sure that'll be great fun for all!!!! please write more!! and thank you for writing such detailed lemons! there are some lemons and they just say "and then they fucked" which does nothing to satisfy me at all!! and i love how you added the whole audience thing! that was really funny! so anyway! write more!! if you do... i will be your best friend and love you forever!!!
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Reviewed By: Shane [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 09:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For one, why can't the Enjoyment Factor go up? I'd rate this atleast a 97. I hope you continue on with this story. I'm taking a shot in the dark, but I'm guessing "SGU" stands for "Sasuke Goes Under"? I just thought I'd take a guess. Ok have fun and good luck with the story. Is it so strange for a guy to like Yaoi? I know it's random, but people look at me like I'm a monster.
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