| "Sugar and Spice Series" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: gackt On: June 28, 2005 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best iruka/kakashi fics i've read yet!
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Reviewed By: flooby_153 On: May 26, 2005 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahhh sorry about the previous spelling and grammar rating, I got you mixed up with another fanfic I'm reading. Gomen~~
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Reviewed By: flooby_153 On: May 26, 2005 03:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was just so GREAT and funny!! As yes, I did find the audience very surprising and kinky, well done XD
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Reviewed By: NarutoLover#? On: April 19, 2005 18:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! *spazzes* I love this fic!!! It ROCKS!!! ^^ I'm a big fan of the Kakashi/Iruka pairing -- they are just sooooooo kawaii, not to mention perfect for each other, ne? ^___~ It's really nice to find a good fic about the two of them (surprisingly, there aren't that many out there.....it really is sad... *sigh*) Oh, and I love the way you mixed the "fluff" and "kink" in this one.....you really pulled it off quite nicely! Yup, yup. So well, in fact, that there is now a new "yaoi category": it is affectionately called "flink". Or "kuff". But I like "flink" better... ^___~ Okay, fine, I admit it: it's late. No, actually, it's not that late......I'm just sick and doped up on meds. XP I hate being sick............ ^^ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, k? Oh, and I think that you should stop after the next chapter (unless you come up with a reeeeeally good idea, at which time I'm not going to complain any, lol).....you know, one last "fling" after they've admitted that they love each other.(well, one more that -we- know of... ^___~ ) That, and it sounds cool: a "flink fling", where flink is flung everywhere!!! Whoot!!! ^___~ *mutters: Okay, okay, I'm going to bed!!! Sheesh!!! You men in white coats are soooooo impatient!!!* ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: lillithdv8 On: March 04, 2005 19:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and the rating isnt enough. I SO LOVE YOUR FIC, amazing you had me drooling/laughing/nosebleeding all the way. WHOAAAAAA, I love this paring, and your stories are real fun. I dont think I've read a clone story yet so bravo for being original (I also dont get round the sasunaru fics its just disturbing to know they're 13 but who knows if they're a lil older maybe...) back to the fic, I was laughing my ass out at the SGU. PLEAAAAAAAAASE write more, loooooove your fic can have enough of this pairing. Suggestions? how about a duel/competition where both kakashi and iruka have to use dirty jutsus on each other?/ or making out in school (not original/ but works though)/ both getting on a mission to protect the crew making the ichaicha movie and getting inspired?/etc
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Reviewed By: Cim26 On: February 05, 2005 20:55 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW very kinky, i love it! Haha. I never liked KakaxIru fan fics, but this was like WOW. I really hope you do continue after the 4th chapter--almost hoping it doesnt end. It'll be sad when it does. I cant find this story on FF.net so i'm guessing ANBU here.
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Reviewed By: jo On: October 09, 2004 23:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg... that was amazing. that had to be the best, most detailed lemon i have ever read! and the part after it!! that had to be the sweetest part!! i absolutely loved that!!! please write more!! i especially loved how they both were like "it's not just about the sex" because true love between two people that are so obviously meant for each other is so touching it hurts to even think about it!!! i mean, can you imagine loving a person that much that they would give up everything that they had worked all their lives for! please! you have to write more!! i love this story so much it would be a crime for you to stop because there are not enough stories like this! ok, i'm running out of the words i'm allowed... i'm currently at 767!!! yay!! please write more!! i want more lemons!!
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Reviewed By: jo On: September 30, 2004 21:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay for kakairu lemony goodness!!!! i want another chapter please!!!! sorry but i don't have any ideas for you... but you could have kakashi use kinky little toys! on iruka and/or himself!!! i'm sure that'll be great fun for all!!!! please write more!! and thank you for writing such detailed lemons! there are some lemons and they just say "and then they fucked" which does nothing to satisfy me at all!! and i love how you added the whole audience thing! that was really funny! so anyway! write more!! if you do... i will be your best friend and love you forever!!!
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Reviewed By: Shane [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 09:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For one, why can't the Enjoyment Factor go up? I'd rate this atleast a 97. I hope you continue on with this story. I'm taking a shot in the dark, but I'm guessing "SGU" stands for "Sasuke Goes Under"? I just thought I'd take a guess. Ok have fun and good luck with the story. Is it so strange for a guy to like Yaoi? I know it's random, but people look at me like I'm a monster.
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Reviewed By: Maha On: June 23, 2004 21:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! I loved the dilog between the men! "You're all about as straight as a box of slinkies." That's hillarious! I'm a huge fan of Kakashi x Iruka, and this one was very well done! So kinky and sexy -.^ Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 20:33 PDT
Comment/Review:
What a funny episode. Kakashi is one kinky SOB. Nicely written too. cdk
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Reviewed By: Nikky On: June 13, 2004 19:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah! i'm such a moron! i wuz so busy praising ur work i 4got to guess! i'm such a baka! anyway my guess would be that it's ANBU...but if it's supposed to somehow stand 4 something more...kinky...i'll still hv 2 think about it. keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Nikky On: June 13, 2004 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is THE best fic i hv EVER read! normally i don't write reviews...actually i've never written a review b4 but ur fic wuz so awesome that i HAD to write one! i hv 2 say that my fav part was when there wuz 2 kakashi's because i've always daydreamed (or jus dreamed) about that, and to actually be able to read it in a fic is indescribeable! i hope u include more scenes like that, but even still this will be my all time favorite fic! write more! i can't wait!
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Reviewed By: shake_it_buddy (too lazy to login) On: June 13, 2004 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaah! continue asap!! XD *glomps you* uhmm... as for guessing.... "A_B_", is "anbu", perchance? ^^;
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 11:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Fun and kinky.
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