| "~Scarlet~" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: I Eat You
Reviewed By: I Am Living On Your Stomach Now [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
My name is Lion. I am from Fujiyama. I eat you. I am eating you. I ate you. Badfic. Badfic. Harakiri. Harakiri.
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Reviewed By: mitsouko-neko On: September 17, 2005 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
perfect, your a great writer you made the words "making love" sound like it was truly beautiful thing. Well, I really enjoyed your fic great job, and bye the way the correct spelling of TOya's name is Toya, not Touya.
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Title: soo cute
Reviewed By: Lily Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo cute but watch your spelling and grammer. but all in all it was very cute.
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Reviewed By: Jahanara_earth [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 20:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey lo i juss wanted to tell u that u spelled Toya wrong.It's well Toya.Well im pretty sure thass how u spell it anywers.But yea, keep on writin optimistically! ur wun n only, Nara-kun
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Reviewed By: Serenitychan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was SO sweet! I can't find enought Aya/Tooya one-shots that are just romantic and sweet.
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