| "Negotiations With The Devil" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shell... On: October 31, 2004 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's one of my favourites, but where are the updates!?
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Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 19:45 CDT
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Mahh! Next chappie Pwease soon....I found a knew happy place. ^_^ Incidentally I've been running out of them lately. Thanks-ies... *sits wating for next chappie* I've got nothing better to do...meaning it's that good. And I can always daydream about what happens next. Good bi!
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Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only gotten a chance to read the first chapter. Cuz...you've neglected to update this story on FanFiction Sanctuary...oh well. I'm more interested in reading this now that I have access to it than getting mad at you for not updating the other site. But just in case some others from the site don't know about this one would be kind enough to make a note and let them know that they can also read it here? I'm just asking. Now that all that's said I'm gonna read the rest of the story. Ja ne. ^_^
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Reviewed By: PawnShoppeLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! It's one of my favorites, so please keep writing ^^
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Reviewed By: PawnShoppeLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! It's one of my favorites, so please keep writing ^^
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Reviewed By: PawnShoppeLove [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! It's one of my favorites, so please keep writing ^^
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: fizziwig On: August 03, 2004 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this pairing and the story. please update soon
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Reviewed By: Kyouri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You have to update soon! This fic is amazing!! I'm a huge Mir/Kag fan and this is one of the best one's I've come across. I'll be keeping track of this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: moonstruckmaiden On: July 04, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!! i love how you have a subplot in this story. it makes it just so much more interesting. can't wait for your next chappie! :)
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Reviewed By: D@RK M@GE On: June 28, 2004 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, I feel like crying. Lately I was considering a jelousy technique but after reading this I don't know if it would work out the way I planned. It's funny how things work out. You may end up finding that you actually love somebody that you would have never given any thought to, but then something like this rolls around and before you know it. Cupid has struck. Please, I will find you and beat you if you do not finish soon...
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Reviewed By: Airashii Kuraku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 22:16 CDT
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I really like this. I've just gotten into the Mir/Kag fandom. I can't wsit to find out what Kag's curse is! Keep the chapters comin'!
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: June 28, 2004 13:37 CDT
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I almost cried reading the first part of this chapter. Where Miroku couldn't picture another day without Kagome. It was bittersweet.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 16:30 CDT
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I found it hilarious that Miroku was actually waiting to get hit by Kagome. Poor Shippo! I can just imagine him on the verge of tears. I was almost crying when Kagome let a tear run down her face when InuYasha went to save Kikyo. Now because of InuYasha's stupidity Kagome might have serious injuries if Naraku's tentacles make contact with her. Hopefully Miroku will save for once again.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U(offline) On: June 13, 2004 13:24 CDT
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Excellent chapter. I liked the fact InuYasha and Sango were both jealous. I hope you'll update soon, cause I really enjoy reading this story.
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Title: Not bad, but...
Reviewed By: Stormlight On: June 13, 2004 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's a pretty good fic, but you should know that you have a bad habit of putting capital letters in the middle of your sentences, which is really distracting to read (at least to someone who is as picky about good grammar as I am). I know some of them seem to have been put there deliberately, but most of them look like typos to me and should have been easily caught and fixed. Please, double-check your grammar before posting your chapters, or have somebody do it for you. It'll be alot more enjoyable to read that way. ^_^
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