| "Nocturnal Admissions" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Stephanie [Inuyasha Fan 15] On: September 23, 2004 17:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should make a second chapter that is a lemon for Gojyo and Hakkai
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Reviewed By: Battleaxe185 On: July 12, 2004 15:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it, most definately loved it. Wanna write a sequal? :) Definately nice. Your characterizations were great, but it seems you could have elaborated a bit more about everything :) Detail is your friend. Keep it up though! I'd love to see an epilogue, or at least a continuation.
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Reviewed By: araria On: June 22, 2004 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Just...wow. that was sexy and sweet at the same time. the lemony scenes were yummy and i bet hakuryuu WAS running over bumps on purpose ^_^ But yeah, nice story- very serious lack of reviews- mediaminer sucks that way. you deserve more- this kicked ass.
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Reviewed By: Me-Nuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
A very sweet story. Poor Gojyo, it must have been so embarrassing, and at the samt time he was blaming himself for disturbing their companionship. You let Hakkai show his feelings for Gojyo in an unexpected way. I was expecting him to come into Gojyo's room when they had separate rooms. But your way was sweeter. (Hope you don't mind me calling masturbation sweet.^_^) Nicely done.
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