| "Friend Or Fooly Foe" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Impressive...most impressive
Reviewed By: Chocobo1986 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfection except for a missplaced word or two but overall its great.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Dorkmon On: October 21, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You read my mind at the end of chapter 9 I was just about to say you were taking them OOC I can't wait for the 10th chapter
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Reviewed By: yuyuhakgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it! But I agree with Iris... Work on ur Grammer and tenses and all that crap.. Well nice fic... Yu Yu Out...
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Title: Hmmmm....
Reviewed By: Iris_Sun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hm... well, my email keeps eating my comp. so I'll just leave my review here. Like I told you before, this story has potential, but you also need to remember alot of the rules of writing. Tenses, scene changes, etc.. There are a few things you need to work on, but all in all it's still a good story.
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