| "I'm not who you think I am" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
could you make the chapters longer
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Title: I'm Not Who You Think I Am
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: I'm Not Who You Think I Am
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 12:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: I'm not who you think I am
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 15, 2004 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! I love S/K stories! Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ermmm
Reviewed By: SilentInquisition On: June 11, 2004 18:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need an editor. Badly. Your sentence structure is awful, you repeat what you've already said, and your punctuation and grammer make me want to weep. Sorry to be so harsh. This isn't a flame. I'm just trying to help. You have a semi-original idea going here. I think. It's hard to tell exactly where you're going with this. You need more focus and detail in your writing. I'm going to e-mail you your first chapter after I've fixed it up some and see if you can tell the difference.
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