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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: foxgirl94 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 18:36 CST
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updat.update.update.
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Title: kill Maya!
Reviewed By: kira-the-dark-kistune On: January 14, 2005 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey is Maya going to die? if she is i'll be happy. oh...this is a Kurama/Kagome fic only right??and its not going to be a triangle or a square is it. i really don't like those! and if this is not just a Kurama/Kagome fic only then i'm sorry to say but you lose me as a reader/reviewer! ^.^ UPDATE YOUR STORY AND PLZ ANSWER MY QUESTIONS BY E-MAILING ME AT: bree@beachbound.org or look up my pen name which is:kira_the_dark_kistune
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 11:08 CST
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i realy hope you continue!!!! pweeeeze i realy like this too. keep going!!!! is this going to turn into a love triangle with Kagome Inu and Shuichi? or between Shuichi, Kagome and Maya. or even a square between Inu, Kagome, Shuichi,and Kouga? that would be interesting.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anouther chapter! Yay.. (I just can't belive I didn't notice it earlier *rubs back of head sheepishly*) Hmm... Hmmm... Hmmmm... I still haven't found one of your stories that I don't like. Odd. I usually find one story that an author has written that I don't like. (that or they only have like one story -_-) please update asap.
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 18:08 CST
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XDDDDDDD I love this!! I kinda want it to be Inu/Kagome... =D that was really funny.
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 23:01 CDT
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Out of all the characters you have to torcher, it has to be Inuyasha doesn't it? ^^ Inu-chan! He would hate that! Scarily Cute chapter! ^^
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Reviewed By: KittenBeyondBelieve On: October 09, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story. the only grammar and spelling prob I saw was fragmente sentences. mind you i wasn't looking so hey! Answers: 1.Naraku isnt there yet but kanna and kagura are. 2.Kiwi-kagome Agent Mango-Sango Spider-Naraku Wind Kagura Mirror-Kanna 3. that Kagome's fiance is coming over and they better get along or else. 4. her fiance 5. The hot chocolate! go Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Youkos luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Luv the originallity of the setting. To answer to ur 2nd question?(I think that's which one it was) Spider is refering to Naraku,(His Scar on his back) Wind is Kagura, (cause that her element) then the mirror would stand for Kanna(Since thats what she uses for her power)! Ha! well at least that what I think it is... I really hope this is a Kag/Kur story...is it????
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Reviewed By: Youkos luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Luv the originallity of the setting. To answer to ur 2nd question?(I think that's which one it was) Spider is refering to Naraku,(His Scar on his back) Wind is Kagura, (cause that her element) then the mirror would stand for Kanna(Since thats what she uses for her power)! Ha! well at least that what I think it is... I really hope this is a Kag/Kur story...is it????
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Title: helo
Reviewed By: Amanda01 On: August 30, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe inuyasha is a puppy/dog dogs can't eat chocolate!!!! HEHE plz plz plz update soon and annoy my cousin ^^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 04:29 CDT
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cools beans. great twist. Boy did Shuichi do a bad thing. For question one I think Kagome is a spy of some sort. This was a warning for her to be beware of some bad people coming either after her or near her. Question two on the other hand I know. I know Kiwi is a fruit. A yummy one too. Kiwi must be Kagome's code name pertaining to question one. Agent Mango may be Sango but it sounded male so I will go for either Miroku or Sesshoumaru more likely Miroku. The name is also a fruit another yummy one too. Spider is obviously Naraku or Onigumo. Wind Kagura. Mirror for Kanna. Question three pertains to an ex partner or a rival of hers. Sounds like someone she don't like. Question four. Spinach though is not a fruit. It's a vegatable. Could that be Miroku due to him being a budhist monk and being a vegitarian? And finally Question five. Simple she did it. He was being a prick to her. If you look closely she made the coco. After suddenly stopping being pissed at him. Too fast a move to not have an alter motive. Her finger lightly touched the surface of the drink before she handed it over. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. And Kagome is the worst one to tick off. So do I get a cookie or something?
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Reviewed By: sahar369 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories and hope you will be able to continue to update. I just love the pairings you use and your stories are just entertaining to read. I hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Juggalette-Ryu On: August 27, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story Update soon
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 16, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Oh and I've got a question, who is Kagome paired with? At first it seems like its Shuichi but now I'm not so sure it's starting to go into the direction of a Kag/Inu fic.
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