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Reviewed By: KittenBeyondBelieve On: October 09, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story. the only grammar and spelling prob I saw was fragmente sentences. mind you i wasn't looking so hey! Answers: 1.Naraku isnt there yet but kanna and kagura are. 2.Kiwi-kagome Agent Mango-Sango Spider-Naraku Wind Kagura Mirror-Kanna 3. that Kagome's fiance is coming over and they better get along or else. 4. her fiance 5. The hot chocolate! go Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Youkos luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Luv the originallity of the setting. To answer to ur 2nd question?(I think that's which one it was) Spider is refering to Naraku,(His Scar on his back) Wind is Kagura, (cause that her element) then the mirror would stand for Kanna(Since thats what she uses for her power)! Ha! well at least that what I think it is... I really hope this is a Kag/Kur story...is it????
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Reviewed By: Youkos luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Luv the originallity of the setting. To answer to ur 2nd question?(I think that's which one it was) Spider is refering to Naraku,(His Scar on his back) Wind is Kagura, (cause that her element) then the mirror would stand for Kanna(Since thats what she uses for her power)! Ha! well at least that what I think it is... I really hope this is a Kag/Kur story...is it????
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Title: helo
Reviewed By: Amanda01 On: August 30, 2004 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe inuyasha is a puppy/dog dogs can't eat chocolate!!!! HEHE plz plz plz update soon and annoy my cousin ^^
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 04:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans. great twist. Boy did Shuichi do a bad thing. For question one I think Kagome is a spy of some sort. This was a warning for her to be beware of some bad people coming either after her or near her. Question two on the other hand I know. I know Kiwi is a fruit. A yummy one too. Kiwi must be Kagome's code name pertaining to question one. Agent Mango may be Sango but it sounded male so I will go for either Miroku or Sesshoumaru more likely Miroku. The name is also a fruit another yummy one too. Spider is obviously Naraku or Onigumo. Wind Kagura. Mirror for Kanna. Question three pertains to an ex partner or a rival of hers. Sounds like someone she don't like. Question four. Spinach though is not a fruit. It's a vegatable. Could that be Miroku due to him being a budhist monk and being a vegitarian? And finally Question five. Simple she did it. He was being a prick to her. If you look closely she made the coco. After suddenly stopping being pissed at him. Too fast a move to not have an alter motive. Her finger lightly touched the surface of the drink before she handed it over. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. And Kagome is the worst one to tick off. So do I get a cookie or something?
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Reviewed By: sahar369 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories and hope you will be able to continue to update. I just love the pairings you use and your stories are just entertaining to read. I hope you write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Juggalette-Ryu On: August 27, 2004 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story Update soon
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 16, 2004 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! Oh and I've got a question, who is Kagome paired with? At first it seems like its Shuichi but now I'm not so sure it's starting to go into the direction of a Kag/Inu fic.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 22:39 CDT
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Poor Kagome. stupid Shuichi. Keep up the good work.
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Title: none
Reviewed By: guerro On: June 18, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update i really want to know wat happens next
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: princessann [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ *siging Kurama and Kagome sitting in a tree* great story is it kag/kur pariring i hope so this cooooooooooooooool i hope Maya will not get in the way *face darkens* i hate it when the pairings or oc i hate it hehe i like pretending to kill the opposing charaters with my sword ^^ i take sword lessons muhahahahahaa
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Reviewed By: devils_child16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great please update soom why does kurama has a gf no fair just kidding please update i want to read what happens next
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Reviewed By: HeavenlyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 18:26 CDT
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Yeah, I like this so far. Sounds good. I love Kag/Kur. (Translation: Need another chapter of "Entering Another Realm".)
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Reviewed By: Spacey Stacey On: June 11, 2004 17:38 CDT
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I love it continue if you will! If not you will find the cliffhanger police coming to arsst you very soon...*ding dong*. Hark, is that them?
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Reviewed By: kuroneko13 (to lazy to log in) On: June 11, 2004 15:53 CDT
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this is just too funny hahah. please up date soon
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