| "Hitomi, GirlDragonslayer" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Van Fan On: July 06, 2004 13:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! PLEEEAAAAAAAAAASE! So yeah: I really like this fic, and I would REALLY appreciate it if you updated soon. ^.^
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh how great. You left us with such a cliffy! I love it! Will Dilandau and Folken realize that Tara is really Hitomi? Oh the suspence and the anticipation. I look forward to your next update after your time away. This is great. Don't worry about really answering my question it is just my way of venting. I just want to read the story and see what is in store for our lovable characters.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 03:11 CDT
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Chapters 3&4 are great! I would really like to see what happens next. I didn't know you had this story posted on ff.net. I know that ff.net doesn't allow any more NC17 fics so I hope this one is enjoyable. I don't remember if you labeled it just an R or and NC17 either way it should be good.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this was so great! It was awsome! Do not stop there and leave me hanging like this. Even if no one else reviews your story this is great please finish it so I can read it and enjoy. If you continue I promise to leave at least a little note everytime. Please update!!! This has been a great start.
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