| "Friends & Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: KyotoXoX On: May 01, 2005 10:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I don't read MomoRyo that much, but you have really done an excellent job of capturing what's special about their relationship. Plus I really liked the bossy Ryoma.
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Title: yea!
Reviewed By: ronin101 On: July 31, 2004 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gave me a great b-day present when you published this fic. ;-) Sorry it took me so long to review it. I love it! You go very in depth and you keep all the characters IN character. My favorite part(s) would be when Ryome shocks poor Momo. ^_^ I think this is very well written. You just about made me cry! I am writing on behalf of my buddies and I who read this fic: we want more, please! I can't wait until you update. ^_^ Good luck and we are all waiting eagerly! ~Ronin101
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Title: great job!
Reviewed By: ronin101 On: July 28, 2004 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this and hope that you will continue this story! I think you kept the characters IN character and kept the humorous undertones that the original manga has (no matter the situation!). I realize you haven't been reviewed much, but I speak for all my friends who have read this when I say, "We want more!" ^_^ We have had fun discussing where you will go with this and what may happen. I hope this encourages you to keep writing. Do you post anywhere else? I'll be looking for you other works!
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Title: KAWAII!!
Reviewed By: kasey_sanada [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS FANTASTIC! I'm totally in love with Momo-chan and Ryoma! Please write more!! I'm begging you!!
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