| "The Golden Eyed Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: When r u going to finish this??
Reviewed By: u know what On: September 17, 2004 16:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
U know u write ok. U just should give it to another person to check it. If u want more people than what u have know, u know what u have to do. Make ur FU****** story better. Just something u could do because I liked it but only the parts I could understand. Come on the kiss part make it more intersting and read to see if it makes sense to u because it defenitly does not make any sense. Maybe when u wrote it u thought it was the best thing. Well no that thing has errors. Check them and tell someone who knows about writting to help u with it. gOoDbYe AND HOPE THAT MY SAYINGS DID SOMETHING TO MAKE THAT STORY BETTER AND TO MAKE U A BETTER WRITTER THAN WHAT U R NOW. peace broBoldItalicsFont Size
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
please continue are i will eat you mmmuuuuhhhhhaaa
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Title: This rulez
Reviewed By: HiKaRi * On: June 20, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW WOW !!!!!!!!!!! I love it. Ale it was great. I just think you have some spelling errors but that is ok. Update soon, because remember I know where u live.. JAJAJAJA I do think evil dudeS laugh don't they???? Well who cares ur story was great. I want to read the ending hurry up write write write IT SOON
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Title: ^_^ wow
Reviewed By: lean_lin On: June 13, 2004 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this story is good and I hope you continue it, I really like it!! please!!! update as soon as you can!!!
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