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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...OMG...the last three chapters were like...was it as good for you as it was for me?...*puffs imaginary cigarette while dispelling hentai thoughts* Oooh, you talk about me and updating! Update soon! *whines* I need some "inspiration"...*cackles with hentai glee*...Loved the wolf transformation and rough and ready nature of the relationship...loved it even more when she kicked his a**, or at least tried to...very interested in where the story will go! And keep the lemons coming! Ja, ne!
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: September 30, 2004 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, there are animal lovers, and then there are animal LOVERS, if you catch my meaning.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: September 29, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just two words do i have to say to you: write more.
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Title: ummm super Wow
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 04:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
i want to know what happens. Please make the next chapter soon!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: TwilightArcher On: August 30, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really Awsome. You have a way of keeping it intresting. But Tsume kind of sounds like Youko Kurama. But anyways please continue
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: August 28, 2004 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic! i loved the lemon! please up date again soon!
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Reviewed By: catogirl2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i want to know what happens. Please make the next chapter soon!
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Title: ummm super Wow
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon... you have a way w/ words
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Reviewed By: Mugetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving you an honest review because I don't believe in false flattery. your writing style itself is grand, but other parts of the story need work. the big thing that needs work is keeping things true to the series. you say this takes place 15-20 years before the series. if that were so, Tsume would have died of old age before the series even began. he's a wolf, he has a wolf's lifespan. you also have him physically transforming. they never transform in the series, it's only an illusion. there are many things that show this if you really pay attention at all. final note: if it acts like a Sue, gets laid like a Sue, and sounds like a Sue, it's a Sue regardless of what one claims it is.
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Title: Hmm....
Reviewed By: Noizchild [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting take. I'd like to see more.
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Reviewed By: Child Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good fic and so well written. I can't wait until you update! ~Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Kye1 On: July 14, 2004 23:30 CDT
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Now That was the best story that I read!! Wow! I got giddy with laughter when I read this.You sure do know how to get the way Tsume acts in the show.Write more!
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Title: ^^;
Reviewed By: Tessa On: July 01, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story so far. While I find it a bit bizarre that Marie would be holding such open and extensive dialouge with "Wolf" (who we knew is lovely Tsume), I know it helps keep the story going, and that people do talk like that to animals. Heck, I speak to my dog like that now and then. ^.~ I'm liking the new character Marie--though I'm hoping for more development on her in the future. I also think it's odd that Tsume rescued her alone...Kiba, Hige, and Toboe would've surely followed. Then again, they might not be in this story, or may not have met yet. I find it hilarious and cute that he's stayed fully in wolf form this entire time. And the whole trying to watch her bathe and then sleeping with her just shows he usual stubborn nature. ^__^; I have a sneaking suspicion that he won't be in wolf form much longer... Overall, I'm enjoying it very much, and hope you'll continue soon!
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was awsome! Update soon
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