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Reviewed By: Gargwin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 23:15 CDT
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I was worried it was taking a turn to a pointless revenge story, I am overjoyed it didn't! As satisfying as the conclusion was, it's equally disappointing it's over. Thank You For The Great Read! :)
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Title: better
Reviewed By: astonished... On: July 10, 2007 22:54 CDT
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that was a good ending. you had me shocked alittle when you killed off your own main character... Are you going to write a sequel?
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Astonished On: July 09, 2007 02:46 CDT
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you killed off your main character? thats different, never had that happen.... lets just see where this takes this...
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Title: -twitch-
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 02:20 CST
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If she is pregnante, i can't wait to see how Tsume reacts. What does they expect? They've been jumping each other like rabbits. Hehe -schemes evilness- it would be too fun to pick and prod those two. Well, please continue. I look foward to the next installment.
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Title: This is a first
Reviewed By: Gargwin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:51 CST
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Ok you've truly impressed the heck out of me. This is the first time I've EVER joined any type of site like this. The only reason I did? BECAUSE YOUR FAN FIC ROCKS!!!! You wouldn't let me tell you that if I didn't join, so here I am :) Now don't disappoint, WRITE WRITE WRITE! November is so far away now :(
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:01 CST
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Wow! And I put this story on favourites because I liked it (never expected an update) ^^ but lucky me!
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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 07:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...OMG...the last three chapters were like...was it as good for you as it was for me?...*puffs imaginary cigarette while dispelling hentai thoughts* Oooh, you talk about me and updating! Update soon! *whines* I need some "inspiration"...*cackles with hentai glee*...Loved the wolf transformation and rough and ready nature of the relationship...loved it even more when she kicked his a**, or at least tried to...very interested in where the story will go! And keep the lemons coming! Ja, ne!
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: September 30, 2004 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, there are animal lovers, and then there are animal LOVERS, if you catch my meaning.
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: September 29, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just two words do i have to say to you: write more.
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Title: ummm super Wow
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 04:49 CDT
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i want to know what happens. Please make the next chapter soon!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: TwilightArcher On: August 30, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really Awsome. You have a way of keeping it intresting. But Tsume kind of sounds like Youko Kurama. But anyways please continue
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Reviewed By: morwen re On: August 28, 2004 12:36 CDT
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great fic! i loved the lemon! please up date again soon!
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Reviewed By: catogirl2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 05:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i want to know what happens. Please make the next chapter soon!
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Title: ummm super Wow
Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 15:06 CDT
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update soon... you have a way w/ words
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Reviewed By: Mugetsu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm giving you an honest review because I don't believe in false flattery. your writing style itself is grand, but other parts of the story need work. the big thing that needs work is keeping things true to the series. you say this takes place 15-20 years before the series. if that were so, Tsume would have died of old age before the series even began. he's a wolf, he has a wolf's lifespan. you also have him physically transforming. they never transform in the series, it's only an illusion. there are many things that show this if you really pay attention at all. final note: if it acts like a Sue, gets laid like a Sue, and sounds like a Sue, it's a Sue regardless of what one claims it is.
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