| "A love like no other" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Okay...
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, i think the lemon would not be a good idea for the next chapter, don't rush it, if the next chapter was a lemon then between who it would be? Let the situation develop emotionally for two or three chapter before the lemon... but of course if you insist on putting the lemon there... i won't stop you, it might please the hentai fans, like myself, but it would certainly lower the qualify of this story...
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer ( not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I look forward to it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sinead On: August 02, 2004 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo!!! u evil;!! i cant wait,!! noooooooooooooo inuyasha cant die!!! and kagome cant bed sessomaro, nonono, its all wrong!! please continue asap!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sesshomarusgirl567 On: July 19, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your story a lot it was really good i hope you write more soon!!!
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Title: You evil person!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story but how come it has to be Kag/sess? Huh???? Please tell me!!! Why won't Inuyasha save her??? Wahhhhhhhhhhhh! **TEARS***
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Title: You evil person!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story but how come it has to be Kag/sess? Huh???? Please tell me!!! Why won't Inuyasha save her??? Wahhhhhhhhhhhh! **TEARS***
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Title: luv it
Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im glad you finally got the chapter up! Sometimes i have a months gap in mine! As for kouga...i guess it would be cool for him to come in...it would be interesting...
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 30, 2004 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story. =)
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Title: Very interesting
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... that was rather... intense, to say the least. as for Kouga... sorry, can't help you on that one.. but this story is good, very good.
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: June 24, 2004 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good you should update soon.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter, i liked it, hope you update soon again!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! GREAT JOB ON THE STORY AND I REALLY LIKE BUT COULD UPLEASE MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: SexyChicklet84 On: June 19, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked how you gave this story an edge but no offense or anything...it sounded too much like all the other fics i've read. i also think you need to workon your gramar and ESPECIALLY your spelling. Do you have microsoft word? well if you do you can just use spell check. i also thought that you rushed into things with sesshoumaru i think you should've put more of a storyline to follow. But hey...im not trying to be negative i mean you have a lot of potential in writing. i REALLY hope you can hurry up and update because i would like to see how this story turns out. Thnx...and check out my fic: Me, Kagome?! good luck cya!! P.S. my real mm.org name is SexyChicklet17 i just 4got my password...lol!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, more please, i've already added it to my favourite story list!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 15, 2004 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice story. update! =)
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