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| "Loneliness of the Free wind" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: GothycCoalChambr(logged out) On: February 12, 2005 05:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww kagura got to be happy for once. i really like this fic and i plan on reading the sequel. i also plan on checking out any other fics you may have written. this was a very long one-shot but well worth it. i hope the sequel is as good as this one.
| Reviewed By: osuwari00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing, I just finished reading it im about to start Time Soul Exodus, i'm sure it will be just as great as this one. I've added you to my author favorites!!! Check out my fic if you want-its called Lost in the Rain and is under Continuation. It's dont done yet though. I hope you like it!!!
| Reviewed By: Mockingbirdflyaway [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:30 EST
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It's an interesting story. I've only had time to read about three chapters, so I don't really see how it compares to my story, but I'll keep reading. Also, I just wanted to note that your use of tenses and the point of view often is somewhat... off? I don't know how to describe it, they just keep switching throughout the paragraphs and the inserted author's notes are a little jarring. Is English your second language? Otherwise, cool story and interesting concept. Keep it up! ~Mockingbird
| Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 11:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent, this story *earned* it rightful place in my favorites. by the by it is indeed "OVA" which stands for:Origanal Video Animation
| Title: Very good rupert
Reviewed By: Kazaana -this, not logged on On: October 22, 2004 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very gued rupert... very gued
| Reviewed By: td On: October 20, 2004 04:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
great story z I really enjoyed it
| Title: Oops...
Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 14:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, Forgot. ^_^0
| Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...i finally read your story, it took me long cause i've been busy, but ever since you reviewed my story and told me about yours i just had to read it and see what it was like, (which i might add, i have update my story and might have a sequel to it *Halloween Par-Tay is my story*if you could check it out again please,and look at the lemon parts cause, i added a bit more to them) but anyway, i really liked that story, and am glad you made up a character for her. also that she is not with sesshomaru! although i always thought that inu and kag's kid would have ears... you made their son really different...i havent read any stories that make there kids like that, not liking his inu blood as much... well i guess i'll be checking out your sequel to it, im kinda wondering what i could be about... it seem like that was a perfect ending unless you're thinking about making the sequel about there destiny, and i must say this is a long one shot. when you told me to check it out i did, and my first thoughts through the first few chapter were, that this one shot didnt seem so long...but then your last chapter was a long as my whole one shot, i was like damn! You're a really great author and i cant wait to read the sequel and more of your stories. i bet they'll be just as good! so cant wait to read them, and if they need to be updated, update them, cause im gonna be reading them soon enough, it only sux that schools starting on tuesday, well later (please check out my story!) ^_^
| Reviewed By: rukusho100 (not logged in) On: August 03, 2004 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! That was so great! Allrgith for your questions. Yes you should make a sequil. It could be about Kagome, Inuyasha, Arc, and Kagura going back to feudal japan because the modern era got to dangerous. Allong the way you could have them meet up with old friends and arc and Kagura slowley discover the wish that Kagome and Inuyasha made on the Shikon No Tama. Arc= the uber cool. He worked out really well, and could turn out into a really cool character. Ideas for a sequal title could be "Back to where wind desired freedom" or somthing like that. Ok! I loved that last chap. It was soo sweet =) Cant wait to read more of your stories! Ruku
| Title: BRAVO!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mad blushes* That opening dedication was so thoughtful!! And thank you so much for that SUPER LONG CHAPTER! I had no idea it'd be so long. And lemon after lemon, well done! Very steamy indeed. I can't believe you wrote all that in just a few days. I really enjoyed how it all tied to together in this last chapter. Although, I may have missed something. I thought the Shikon Jewel was re-inserted into Kagome but you say it was used for their wish...I didn't catch what the wish was. Anyways, I cracked up with the pager thing. LOL, oh and it was so sweet how you added the jumping over rooftops just like Inuyasha and Kagome. The fact you added the rape wasn't bad - I had been expecting it. For a while, I thought you were just going to leave it out. But yeah, I like that in the end you make sure there are no loose ends - EVERYTHING gets explained one way or another. Even the little things like how Kagome and Inuyasha deal with never ageing, down to where Sango and Miroku have been since they came back to the present. Well, I applaud you. *claps* This last chapter has most definitely "gone out with a bang". And you better get some damn reviews. *shakes fist* lol. And I'm glad to have helped you out. From one artist to another, I think you'd agree that a little belief from someone can go a long way with any sort of artist. Oh and since I'm down to about 163 characters, I'm going to answer your questions in another review. lol - the Lone Vixen
| Title: I hope I don't lose ya on this one...
Reviewed By: Lone Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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One-shot my ass. Lol, you couldn't write a short story for the life of you. And I love that! I'm noticing more and more by reading all your fics that you are a genius at maintaining a balance in your fic. By balance I'm talking about how there's a good amount of incredably hilarious comedy, (*refers to the pager, the PE bathroom scene at the end, & Inu&Kag's sexcapades*), but you can easily flow into serious and emotional moments, then there's the explainations or facts you come up with that fit the story together allowing it to make sense and be believable. And the length of your stories has a lot to do with that. I like that you don't just cut to the chase, like a lot of fic writers do, (to each their own though), and you give yourself room to show the readers what characters are about and the process of which they reach certain revalations in the story. I don't think this is making sense. I hope so though because I really respect that you take time to THINK about what you're writing. And this...is why I think you will one day have a professional writing career of some sort. Seriously, YOU COULD DO IT! lol Anyways, I love this Arc character, and your approach to Kagura. I can't wait to see how things unfold between them. *sigh* I'm such a sap and I love these Youkai soulmate stories. AND QUIT TEASING ABOUT THE LEMONS! Get that next chapter up soon!! You have a lot of work to do because you have three fics to work on! lol, Happy Writing! -LoneVixen
| Reviewed By: GML13 On: July 02, 2004 23:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, update this fic! It's really good. Actually, your original character is a very good one, not like others I've seen...
| Reviewed By: wow.... On: June 15, 2004 16:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is the first fic that i've read that Kagura isnt the 'bad guy'. i never saw her as a evil person as many people potray her as, its just because Naraku held her heart and controled her soul as well, the evil SOB. i really love your fic so far too, so please update soon.
| Title: nice storie!
Reviewed By: jasmine hamilton On: June 15, 2004 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really Really really Liked ur story!! It was very interesting and very well writtin! Kepp up the good work! bibi :-)
| Reviewed By: Rukusho100 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. It's most deffently nice to see a story from Kagura's pov. Keep up the good work! -Ruku (btw..is arc the son of a certian couple that is super talanted...if you know what im getting at...trying not to give the names away if im right ^^;)
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