| "Blow out the Candles" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: wild's girl On: August 09, 2004 21:27 CDT
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i love this story, fantastic, update soon, pleasssssseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Unidentified [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this... i just simply LOVE THIS!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 07, 2004 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: August 06, 2004 20:23 CDT
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update update update! THIS IS PRETTY FUCKIN INTERSTING! awsome story!
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Reviewed By: loulou 4729 On: August 06, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just resieved an email saying that your fic was updated. Really liked the chapter. I can't wait to read more when it comes out.
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Reviewed By: ~*jessica*~ On: July 09, 2004 12:33 CDT
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if you have trouble with mediaminer, i suggest you post your story on fanfiction.net...and can you please tell me if you update? (ur_swt_azn_gal@hotmail.com) I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: LittleTyke On: July 08, 2004 13:47 CDT
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To bad about the problems you've been having with MM, hope you ca fix it. Anyways, funny chapter. I love how you incorporated Myouga's fiancee in there, I remember that anime ep and it was so funny. Please update asap!!!
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story please update soon :)
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Unidentified [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Not only are the ideas and plot fascinating, but also your descriptive writing, which brings your story to life, and also the great course of the story which keeps the readers in suspense for the lemon. I am 100% positive that your type of lemons, aren't just like any lemons, but one that's so full of description, it just may be the best I'll ever read! Please fix your problem with mediaminer.org, quickly and update your story, because it's quite obvious that I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and keep on writing, because it seems like to me that you have potential to become a famous author someday in the future! :)
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: July 02, 2004 11:36 CDT
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i really adore this story. the detail and originality is amazing. great job and keep up the excellent work
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Reviewed By: reality loss On: July 02, 2004 11:27 CDT
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waiiiii!! i love this story! it's very discriptive and well thoughtout! please keep writing such excellence!
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Reviewed By: LittleTyke On: June 30, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm definitely likin' where this story is headed. Hope Myouga's punishment isn't too severe. For some reason, MM is being a real pain when trying to view your second chapter! Wonder why. Anyways, please, please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: SexyChicklet84 *logged off* On: June 30, 2004 15:57 CDT
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i 4got to tell you that you spelt 'kaeda' wrong!! its spelt keade...there ya go! LOL...my biggest pet peeve is mispelled character names!! tee hee! ja ne! -SexyChicklet17
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Reviewed By: SexyChicklet84(actually 17 but im logged out) On: June 30, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like what you have written so far! You had a few spelling errors...but thats all. Please keep uwriting and UPDATE soon!! plese! im begging you!!! You need top update more often!! LOL -SexyChicklet17
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