| "Two Words That Started It All" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 28, 2005 00:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
it was okay, thought the thought of the words 'fuck you' comming out of kagome's mouth is indeed a bit scary...
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Reviewed By: inuyashachic612 On: January 31, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!thanx for the link and by the way I LOVE IT! this is great jus like all ur other stories! its so cute too and its funny how inuyasha got aroused by those words lol. well i love it now im gonna go read ur other ones...after i read those...im gonna have read every single one of ur stories on ff.net and mm.org...unless u got some more i dont no bout. lol. bye!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definently very sweet. I really liked it, and can promise to read more.
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Reviewed By: MGSFREEK101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemons and limes, nickels and dimes. The fic was nice, I liked it.
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH that was a good story, i thought you might not right lemons or something though becuase in your story When we first Meet theres not even a lime, this was a good story, i'll try to read more of them!
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Reviewed By: SexyChicklet17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good! It was kinda like a lot of other fics except for the f*** you part. LOL. I liked it though. keep writing...i wanna read the rest of your stories too! ja ne!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was cool Kagame swore and not Iy
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Title: good
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u must be the best author out there ur the greatest i love all ur work and i'm gonna try and read all of it!!! keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Spike of Doom On: June 19, 2004 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm i see why you couldnt post it on FF.net i guesse i was more graphic than your other lemons but graphic also means better hehe GJ.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so shocked when Kagome said those two words i laughed so hard picturing Kagome say that. Oh awsome writing.
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha I laughed sooo hard when Kagome said those two words!! I really wasn't excepting that! As usual, you did a great job and wrote a really hott lemon! The ending was so sweet!! And don't give up on love! I'm sure someday you'll find someone great...the world always seems to be conspiring...just ignore it! lol ^_^
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 15, 2004 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooo nice one shot, it wasnt all meaningless and stuff. For only have one chapter or base plot it was really really good. The ending was cute even tho it seemed a little sad when Inu seemed to think it was all meaningless, yay it wasnt! lol
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Reviewed By: RabidFanGirl On: June 15, 2004 10:06 CDT
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*Jaw hits floor* um...............you should really consider sticking that one of AFF.net.......so graphic and sweet with a plot line too...........Rabid Fan gives it the bite of approval *chomp* Love Ya Queenie
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great oneshot
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 14, 2004 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you can write it because although that is what you may wish to believe part of you would not be totally opposed to such a thing and so you find an outlet for it in your writing. Appolgies if I stepped over the mark in writing this but personally I often find that I can express emotions I believe I have long forgotten how to feel through my words. And that's just me rambling again. As I said before I hope the finals go well. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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