| "In Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Nihaoranma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah... that was REALLY COOL!!!!!I liked Sango's and Inuyasha's best, but they were all really good. Could you maybe do one for Rin? Shippo?
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel(nsi) On: April 20, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhnnn ^^ i loved the inuyasha one.. ahh.. it was so good.
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
These are cute, interesting stories - it's nice to see a collection like this linked together. The one thing that detracts from them is the style they're written in - short, choppy sentences give a "blocky" feel to the flow of writing and can cause deterioration in the mood of the story. Fleshing these out more would make them much deeper and more enjoyable. The ideas are good, they just have to be developed a bit further.
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Title: Love's like tthat
Reviewed By: ~Blanch-a-Blancs~ On: July 29, 2004 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey yo ya'll! just wanna say that this was so kewl! and as far as i know completely origional-like. iy looks into kagome's mind perfectly. it's like your looking staight into her actual thoughts. very deep, i lurve it! L8rz! ~Shesshy-Slipperz/S.Wooz~
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 00:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow... this is really neat! When are you going to do more? They're really cool!
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Reviewed By: animegrl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 09:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is interesting. I can't wait to see Inuyasha's one! I liked the fact that you got into their heads and wrote what they thought and felt. Sometimes, people just write what the people say.Please updatre soon.
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