| "A Deeper Look" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: flowers_followed On: March 17, 2005 15:21 CST
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This is nice. Your emotional description is great. You capture the reader's attention well and transmute those feelings of the main character nicely. However it seems to go in the usual sess/rin circles and I think you can do better. With your talent, an original idea would blossom into a wonderful piece of work.
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...that was really well done!
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Reviewed By: Kuroneko13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
very very good,is all i can say.
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