| "Sister Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: sailormoonmarisa
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. i think the parings should be marik and sapphire/ tea and yugi or yami/ joey and mai/ serenity and ryou/ or for added fun you could have ryou and marik fight over her. Or you could just use joey. That would make kaiba angry. which all in all would be hilarious. Oh and by the way mokuba's eyes are some sort of purple color. Seto's eyes are blue. but the tea and yugi is a definate pair. unless you want to go out of the ordinary and go with someone like duke. but that would be to wieird. diefinatly tea and yugi. All in all this is really good. Chapters need to be a bit longer. It is reallllllly enjoyable. Keep goin.
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Title: ur fic rocks...
Reviewed By: chibibunny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, your fic is great, but i agree with the other person, way to short! but i still love them so much! don't hate me!! i love ur original character, she is so cool! i can't wait fro seto to find out that she is his sister! phwee, that will be cool! oh, and i'm a die hard yugi fan, but i don't have any ideas about who she should be paired with. who is she compatiable with? i just dont know......
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Title: Princess Atina
Reviewed By: Princess Atina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed it and i hope you update soon. oh, and by the way, the person who sings the song "I'm Too Sexy" is by a guy named Right Said Fred. i hope that helps if you don't already know this. this is good so far. ^^ check out my fic when you get a chance. P.S. i think Sapphire should be paired off with Marik.
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Title: Short
Reviewed By: Nice~Neko On: July 01, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not flaming you or anything but I think each cahpter is too small. Try making the chapters a little longer and more interesting and you might get some more reveiwers. I'm only being honest, not flaming you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Child of the Night People [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. I like Joey. To piss Seto off. It would build the plot. ^____^
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