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| "Ad Astra" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Cy4U2NV [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job!! It's one of my favs! Read it first on Fanfic.net! Nice! i'm a HUGE fan of 003009 fluff. i'm tryin to write one myself. lol. I like it a lot!
| Reviewed By: Lady Tolkien On: July 12, 2004 17:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, uhm, this fic is interesting but I think there is something astray: Françoise had expresed not being ready to have sex, and Joe had made an auto commintment to respect her choice, then they get drunk and end up having sex, and as you describe it, Joe wasn't that tender to her, you said it yourself, he racked her. Well, Id I were Fran, I'd be really really upset/sad/hurt/disapointed with Joe, or what do you think? A first experience like that is not a nice thing to get from some one who is suposed to love you
| Reviewed By: M-X On: July 09, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... what a story, beautiful limes I have to say, and the plot, it feels REAL, I mean, all we hardcore shippers always make these two live between pink clouds and stuff, but here is the other side, a side where it shows their fears, insecurities, and struggles against that little detail called real life. Please update soon Wilfire, by the way, I saw your nes account was also erased from ff.net. uhm... Well, I'd love if you went and checked on my new stories and "Don't mind the host" is almost finished! :D
| Reviewed By: Fantasygirl On: June 15, 2004 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! I can finally review this chapter. I thought it was great! I hope 009 and 003 stay together. Oh yeah! I'm going to New York next week, so if you update I won't be able to review until I get back on July 11. Hope everyone is having a nice summer!
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