| "Seduction: The Secret Life" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: WOW ^.^ ^.^
Reviewed By: Chibi Enu ^_^ On: August 29, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to write more please???? ^_^ ^_^ I'll beg you!! It is so good!! I love the plot and the fact that you ended chapter 10 with Marik acting all scary.. ^_^ ^_^ *starts begging* Please update soon?? ^.^ ^.^ Your fic rocks and you rock so, ROCK ON!!!! \m/ \m/ \m/ \m/
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Reviewed By: MariksLoveSlave [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 22:01 CDT
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I am not to fond of the SetoxMokuba pairing but this story was way to cute! It made me like Mokuba more. hehe, I like Marik too! And of course Bakura! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to find out what happens!
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Title: WHaT??!!!
Reviewed By: Kittylyn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did not just do what I think you did!!! You are not going to have Marik attempt to murder, or actually murder, Seto. I swear to god, I will fall over dead if anything like that happens!!! By the way, great fic you're writing. Don't stop, just take extra long vacations when you run into days on which you lose sight of the plot, or cannot write well. "There is no such thing as writer's block. There are days on which you write well, and days on which you write poorly, but there is no such thing as a day on which you cannot write." -Anonomus May inspiration find you well (and me too!!!) Kittylyn P.S. Sorry for not reviewing for a while. I was on vacation and couldn't get to a computer, let alone a computer with internet acsess(sp?????).
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God. Malik has deffinitely lost it. It was obvious he had a thing for Mokuba and that he didn't take his relationship with Bakura very seriously, but that was very surprising. I can't wait for the next update. :P
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Reviewed By: Twist_ On: August 19, 2004 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely great.Cant wait for more of your stories.More lemon please........Thanks.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Jade L. On: August 03, 2004 07:02 CDT
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Absolutely sensational, breath-taking, and totally believable... a truly amazing piece!!! WOW... I"m working on a Seto + Moki fic myself, wish my writing flowed like yours though ^-^ *sighs*. Please update soon! This is far too beautiful to keep it all to yourself lol... :)
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 21:07 CDT
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I really like.you really know how to write a good sex chapter.please update when you can.I am enjoying this story.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 18:54 CDT
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I really love this story.please update soon.your good.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this chapter.I can't wait to see what happens next. I really like your story.keep up the good work.great choice of songs.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 17:41 CDT
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hey very good. please update this awsome story.I can't wait to see what happens next.I just hope that this will work between the kiba brothers.
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