Title: jin-i-seid
Reviewed By: Jin-i-Seid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm...your first attempt at yaoi? o.O o...k. i wouldn't really call that yaoi....maybe shounen-ai at most--but truly, the story was good even with the yoai. it was extrememly heartwrenching, and exceptional in the sensee that one doesn't see many death-fics for aya-yohji parings. some of the grammar was off, but aside from that ur writing style was different than most (a bit bland tho, but different) and further bettered by ur intersplicing of evanescence's song. nice fic. keep up the good work and improve on that 'yaoi'. lol.
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