| "A Life for A Life" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: mmmoomoo On: July 15, 2004 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude, different subject, never would have thought of it. didnt like the gohan-commits-sucide thing. guess i would have enjoyed it more if i weren't such a huge gohan fan... oh, well!
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Title: Interesting Concept
Reviewed By: Jman X2 On: June 15, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like in my title, I do say it is a interesting concept. But not the best read I've had. The originality is high due to I have never ehard or even saw this idea before. Creatitivty could of increased hte rating if you fleshed it out more. I enjoyed this 'aight I guess. On another note Spelling was really well. As is grammar. But I ain't no english teacher so thumbs up! Nice style, I assume. Nice short story overall.
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