| "Third Crowd" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Hi Hi!! Remember meh?? It ish Kat ^^
Reviewed By: MAIDEN OF TIME AND SPACE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowies!!! Great story ^^ Keep it up fool! BWAHAHA!! Oh! And I updated my wonderful fic, "Kat's Party Bash" Check it out ^^ Ja ne for now! I'm having a graduation party! I'll tell ya what happens later ^^ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Keiya(too lazy to sign in) On: September 11, 2004 00:47 CDT
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Chapter 16 was great! You do well on the side stories and non-combat scenes! Keep it up!
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Title: Hehehe
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks Keiya, I'll try to improve more hehehe.
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Title: Weird
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey you guys noticed something weird? Some of the reviews are not shown unless you write a review weird...
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Title: WHOA!!!
Reviewed By: MetalKeiya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Priceless, Just priceless. I found that you did major editing on your characters, and they are for the best. I see you've changed their names, but Rem and Sato are still as great as ever. The only gripe I have is your grammar, which I've seen has improved over the Chapters. Writing is like drawing, in which practice makes perfect, right? I loved the idea of N.E.O, and the the depth of the characters. You've presented them very well. Plus, the gags and jokes are simply the best. I hope you'll get to end this one, alright?
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Title: Thankies
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 02:35 CDT
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Hey, to all who read my fic, thanks for your time, I really appreciate it if my fic of mine gives you some entertainment *sob* hehehehe I don't want to get sentimental and all I just want to be crazy at least while in the net because NO ONE CAN STOP ME Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Thanks again! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SKF13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is getting really sweet!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: MetalKeiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:18 CDT
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Very promising story. Keep it up. Although typos here and there cloud the story, everything seems fine. I flook forward to the next chapter. Feel free to drop me a line before posting if you want me to check the chapter for typos.
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Reviewed By: MetalKeiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Very promising story. Keep it up. Although typos here and there cloud the story, everything seems fine. I flook forward to the next chapter. Feel free to drop me a line before posting if you want me to check the chapter for typos.
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