| "The diary" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Iceis [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your initial idea was very cute. I do kinda agree with one of the other reviews becasue zoro was only 7 or 8 when Kuina died so its kinda...hard to picture...., but i would have loved to see a love blossom between Kuina and Zoro. So thats about the best its going to get lol. Zoro was a little over emotional for me while hes reading the diary, but its possible. A little to much overuse of the word flower, but its also understandable considering if Kuina was writing that in her diary then maybe thats the only word she knew to put. I give you props for haveing the courage to write this. I did like it!! Please dont think im just slamming the fic! I was interested to see where you were going with the story as I read. I also like how you left off with the idea that Zoro and Tashigi could get together. Its the best One Piece relationship in the world lol. Other then that thanx for such a original idea...or at least the first time ive seen someone attempt a zoro Kuina fic. Good job!
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Reviewed By: Monkey Man Bob On: June 07, 2005 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
(TOWARDS THE END) YOU CALL THAT A "LITTLE LEMONY"!?!? I'D SAY THAT'S PRETTY DAMN LEMONY!!!!! Nice work though!
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Title: AWWW!!!
Reviewed By: Nina Whitefoot [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great I loved it!!! I was so cute!! ROCK ON!!!
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Reviewed By: Foxy Tai On: August 30, 2004 18:40 CDT
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That was cute (if thats the word!) I love Zoro and Kuina together, I like them in an older sense but this was still very good. Great job I'll be sure to check on your cross over of Ramna 1/2 and One Piece, buh-bye. Foxy_Tai (who is too damn lazy too log herself in -_-')
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Reviewed By: .... On: July 10, 2004 01:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Zoro was less than ten years old when Kuina died. eww.
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