| "Maid in Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:43 CDT
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lol i luv ur a/n...a funny aya lol now that was great. nice fic!
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Reviewed By: Theresa On: July 03, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding! I loved it. Deserves a sequel in the best way.
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Reviewed By: Tahru On: June 19, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one of the best Weiss comedy lemons I have ever read! Please, please write a sequel or at least another fic soon!!! Your characterization of Schuldig was terrific and sexily evil (just like him) and Yohji was hilarious. Even Aya seemed in character yet fun. And what a wonderful mental picture of Yohji... Great job!!
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Reviewed By: Black Kittens Dream [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 02:33 CDT
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Okay, I've only one word to describe how I feel about this story... SEQUEL!!!!... because Aya needs his experience with Schu too! And then a second sequel in addition to it with a nice little threesome. *nods* You see, no need to stop at this point. By the way, I loved the humour in there. Great story and I really hope you'll continue. Black Kitten
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: June 17, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I actually wanted to read more. I hope that you continue this fic. I'm looking forward to what could happen between Yohji and Aya.
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:58 CDT
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*giggles and claps* Oh, that was lovely! I was very much amused! Ooohhh..Yohji in a French maid's dress! hehehehehehe Will you be writing a "next time" fic? Please? Pretty please? *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:43 CDT
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I think this is a really well written and very cool story. Also I feel it's too bad it's a one shot. Sooo, you need to write more or make this an arc or something, so there! I decree that you need to write more amazing fics. Especially like how you worked with Schu's abilities as well as how you characterized Yohji. Woo ^_^
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