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 Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2004 22:24 CDT
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Very nice start. I have a huge amount of sympathy for Vegeta. He always seems so uncomfortable and unsure, but not willing to let anyone know that. You bring that across very well. Looking forward to you getting the Goku and Vegeta together. (A few minor mistakes towards the end of the second chapter, but nothing major.)
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