| "Any Ideas for a Title?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: cas On: October 18, 2004 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think u shud do both. nice lemon. they both sound REALLY good to use. keep at it. i enjoyed it very much ;0 :)
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 08:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can`t wait for an update. You are already have my idea for a title. But you could anything you want. As long as you keep going.
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Reviewed By: BaconTomato [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.. that was interesting.. The only complaint I have really is about the spelling/grammar and style of writing. I amd rating it extremely low because it wasn't proper. (yes I know I'm tough on s/g and sow O_o) Every new speaker gets a paragraph, names and places are capitalized, ect. I am rating the Enjoyment Factor 8 because it was sort of confusing.. O_o That's it really, I would have to read more chapters before I can think up a good title ^-^ I emailed you using the email form on MM.org, if that's the wrong email, tell me and I'll resend it to the email you put in your review.. I'm too lazy to type up a new email, that's all... O_oU
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Title: i'll be ur beta reader!
Reviewed By: ImaginarySpirit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved this story the lemon was great, i loved everything about it really!;) anyway my email adress is idiot_printer@hotmail.com i'd love to hear from you;)
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: June 19, 2004 11:58 CDT
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I loved this. I think lust of the four would work you could add onto that. I would love to read it.
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Title: yami-shi-tenshi
Reviewed By: yami-shi-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how about you name it: lust or love between school projects??? or maybe lust between four
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