| "Addiction" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 14:15 CDT
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Poor Yamcha! I think you've caught the tone perfectly. I love his helplessness, his cluelessness. And you've got Bulma down perfect---Yamcha is an afterthought to her. I've never believed they had a "great love" as far as Bulma is concerned. I do think Yamcha's feelings were much stronger and you've shown that here. I also love how Yamcha can't quite identify *why* he keeps coming back. It is a mystery because Bulma doesn't treat him very well. And to find out the truth from Vegeta, of all people. I liked that very much. Great story for all us Yamcha fans out there!
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Title: Okay then.
Reviewed By: BloodRedtone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I liked it. I haven't read many fics in Yamcha's perspective, because I'm a Vegeta/Bulma supporter. But your fic made me a little sympathetic for poor Yamcha. Hey, read my little ficcy, "Who Are You People??" I promise that it will get better than Chap 1 ^^
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 10:30 CDT
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aww, poor Yammie! I love Yamcha. That scene in the anime when he sighs on the cliff always got to me. I wish this story were longer--another scene with Bulma explaining what happened. She owes that to Yamkins, doncha think? The Vegeta confrontation was interesting. Veg would've been like that too--abrupt and just menacing enough. debbiechan
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