| "Running" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Hey-Lo!!
Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 21:10 CDT
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Hey, No Hateing here,Loved the Chap! Update soon,plz! Bye^_~
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 16:27 CDT
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ummm... interesting. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Angels Pain (me) On: July 02, 2004 12:03 CDT
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Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:34 CDT
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Hey, Since you've already answered the question about the pairings, all I have to say is chaps 6&7 are really good. I'm also likein the way yur bringin other characters in now. ^_^ can't wait to see what happens, bye!
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Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:25 CDT
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Reviewed By: Game girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand the story line yet but if you up date *soon* then it will get better!!! I have one question.... dos Kai like the girl or is it Ray?? at this point I can't tell!
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Title: Hey,hey!
Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 20:57 CDT
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Hey, i finished reading chaps 4n'5 a bit ago but couldn't review cuz my comp was acting up, but neways. I liked them and i thought that Kai wasn't really ooc at all. I also liked the secretive, suspenseful part of the story.
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really bad spelling but otherwise its really good continue please and *gets starwars like* may the spell check be with ya anywhay continue soon
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Title: Chap 3!
Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 12:25 CDT
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Hey,read your update, and it was really good. Rei and Kai are my fave! can't wait for more chaps! bye!
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Title: Rei's Age
Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 19:59 CDT
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Hey, I'm really enjoying your fic so far and hope the next chapters are as good as the first 2. I also reviewed about Rei's age, I keep on seeing that he's 15/16 at least in the last season he's 16/17 or older. I'm watching beyblade in Canada So I'm sort of missing a lot. NEwayz Luv ya story! Lella
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