"A Father's Secret gift" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 03:26 CDT Comment/Review: Excelent story. But I think it would be better if oh I don't know we could read it. Try uploading again.
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Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 10:52 CDT Comment/Review: um.. can't even read it. might want to reupload with a file that's not corrupted.
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Title: clean it up please Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 02:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: if you clen this up you would probably get more reviews
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 01:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: wher is the story i cant find it in that mess
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Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 20:29 CDT Comment/Review: Um...I'm sure you have a great story, but I can't read it. Try reposting or editing or something, because I don't think any of us can see it...
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 13:10 CDT Comment/Review: UMMMM I DONT KNOW IF YOU KNOW THIS BUT ALL THE WRITING IS LIKE THIS FOR ME: ôL¤ÓÓ Ó %ä2¼A`‹ArialmÔ0&eacut e; î¡Ó0ê:i¢×+003|x ÿU‹ÿÀÀÀÝ ƒüœ!ÝÔUSUS.,ÔÝ ÝÔ_ÔÔ‡!X¨¿XX XÔÓ
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