| "A Different Kind of You" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: angelbaby
Reviewed By: NKA: nubian jewel On: February 26, 2005 23:25 CST
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Well, I can't say that I wasn't disappointed. I was so looking forward to that lemon, but if you say you'll put one in the next chapter, then I can't be mad at you for too long, as long as you keep your promise. I like this chapter, although your spelling and grammar was a little rough, but I'm not gonna complain, it's been awhile since an update and as long as you put up a new chapter, I'm happy and look past the gramatical errors. I hope you update soon and I'm going to be expecting a lemon. :p
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas (not logged in) On: February 24, 2005 01:59 CST
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Nope not disappointed at all. I loved this chapter, and I am anxiously awaiting the next. great job.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas (not logged in) On: January 27, 2005 01:03 CST
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ARGH! a CLIFFIE?!?! WTF?! Cliffies are evil! don't you know that? write more story, NOW!
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Title: angelbaby
Reviewed By: Finally! On: January 25, 2005 15:58 CST
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YAMI/ YUGI LEMON! YAMI/YUGI LEMON! YAMI/YUGI LEMON! YAMI /YUGI LEMON! YAMI/YUGI LEMON! YAMI/YUGI LEMON! YAMI/YUGI LEMON! YAMI/YUGI LEMON!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 08:36 CST
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Woohoo! *dances around the room* I'm glad Duke is being a nice guy about this. Despite all the 'rawr, Yugi's mine, I'm gonna get him back', he told Yugi about Yami's feelings! Now Yugi and Yami can get together! I loved this chappie!
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Reviewed By: ...^^ On: January 23, 2005 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay *throws confeti* there gunna get together^^ sooooo nice....
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Reviewed By: Beysie (it won't let me log in!) On: January 23, 2005 00:13 CST
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*faints from excitement* Yay, now Yugi knows about Yami! Now they can be together, just like they deserve... It's a beautiful thing. I'm glad to see that Duke saw the right way of things, it was a necessary evil I'm sure. Please update this, ok?
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 09:02 CST
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Awwwww! Poor Yami! He wants his little Aibou! Loved the chappie, can't wait for the next one!
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Reviewed By: Motje [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 05:46 CST
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That was the best present I had so far :D
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 03:14 CST
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It's good to see Yugi up an moving, even if it's slowly... I do hope that Yami tells Yugi how he feels, and not wait too long for it! It's turning into one of those "they love each other but are too afraid to tell the other" situations... but I don't mind a bit! It's good to see you updated again, thanks! Now, you need to update again soon, ok? Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas (not logged in) On: December 10, 2004 03:14 CST
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and some slightly sadistic part of me really wanted Duke and Yugi to have a wild and passionate fling before he wound up with Yami, but oh well, I'll just have to write one of my own I suppose! This story is really great, but (And this is only constructive criticisim) You could use a beta reader to help catch any typos or stucture flaws. Trust me, they can come in mighty handy. Mine even helped me get over my writers block once! This story really is great and I would love to see another chapter really really soon!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas (not logged in) On: December 10, 2004 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, please continue it I beg of you! PLEEEEEEASE! It's soooooo goood!
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 09:29 CST
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Awwwwww! That chappie was so cute! I loved it! Yay for fluff!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 23:12 CST
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Yay, he's accepting Yami's help! I'm so happy! *does a silly dance* They are so good together, I do hope Yugi realizes that and makes Yami his boyfriend! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Beysie (autolog isn't working again) On: December 07, 2004 01:47 CST
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Yes, now things are hopefully going the right way! Yugi needs to be with his soulmate, Yami... Please update soon!
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