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Title: ^^ so kawaii!
Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehe loved yur story! at first when i was reading it i thought it gona be like the show "Joe Millionaire" or "Bachelor" but it it really steers away from that...and inu and kag have already kissed is sooo kawaii! i loved it! man, all of the girls have at least one very good reason to try to win...i mean except for kagura where the heck is she? and when everyone came inside the room did they hear what kikyo said? you know since they're demons and they have high hearing?...blah anyway update soon! your reviewers want you to!
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Title: Awwww!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 04:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect to a T. This was a very good chapter. I love how Inuyasha said that he didn't believe Kikyo. Well, Kikyo's slowly losing the war, not to mention the money debts. Sango's falling for a pervert, and going to be able to pay her debts. Kagura's no where to be found, and probably can't wait to see her room. Kouga's dissappeared after the whole 'knee to the crotch' thing, and Kagome's plan of having Inuyasha fall in love with her is working both ways! What could be better! Maybe if you updated one or ten more times, but hey!, I'm happy right now and everyone of your reviewers are too! Take your time, but not too much, I tend to get really anxious! LOL!
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Reviewed By: Interested Observer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Oh so great! That is so overly cute! I was actually thinking that Kikyo's plan was going to work. AH! That's a scary thought ~_^. I love your story so much! new it went on to the favorites list after the 2nd chappie but I never really got around to writing a review. So today I realized that it's not fair to expect constant updates if you haven't reviewed. (consider this review a demand to update soon) Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Kyouken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this chapter, it was sweet. I think you should go with more romance in the next chapter, but thats just me. Good job and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 12, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story it defenetly wasent a waestof time i really really really hope you update as soon as u can so great story and keep up the greatwork.
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
It definetly wasn't a waste of time. Great chapter update soon.
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Reviewed By: inu_luv_her151 On: July 12, 2004 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great chapter can't wait until you update I think it's pretty interesting with both fighting and romance. but hey it's your story ur choice. well update soon
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon Plz!! you didnt leave a cliffy, but i still want to know what happens next!!!!!! PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!^______^
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Title: I'm baaaaaaaaaaaack!!!!
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 (not signed in) On: July 12, 2004 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm back! That was a really great chapter!! ^^ I still like fighting, so in the next chapter there should be romance AND fighting!!!!! Update soon! ^^
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I REALLY, REALLY like this story! ^^ Update as soon as possible!!!!!!! I want to know what happens!!!!!!!! Update, update, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 08, 2004 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a great story I hope you update soon please! can't wait to find out Inuyasha's reaction to Kagome's kiss
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Title: !_! @_@ ^_^
Reviewed By: hollow angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh....my...god!!!!!!1 YOU DID NOT JUST LEAVE A CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!! omg omg omg omg...im ganna pass out from the angst! dammit....anyway...great fic...i lovedd it and please update soon...because believe it or not...i wanna find out what happens. and what i am wondering is...how come you dont have that many reviews??? You deserve at least 45 intead of a measily 16...anyway...im adding to your collection of reviews^_^
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: fudge On: July 07, 2004 10:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked the story. I can't wait to see what Inuyasha's expression will be so update soon. see ya! :)karen reyna
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Reviewed By: animeluver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooooo cooool! Update soon.
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is pretty damn cool! You've got to continue! You hear that a lot, don't you? Anyways, this story sounds like a success so far! Just continue in the same style of writing and everything will be perfect! This is so cool! It's going under my favorites!
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