| "My Other Life" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-whitefire, not logged in [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 21:52 CST
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awesome chapter. really. too bad it has to end on a cliffie... but i shall [atiently await your next chapter, o mighty authoress...*bows to all powerful writer*. May your chapters be long and often!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-whitefire, not logged in On: December 17, 2004 20:59 CST
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why would they have gone to the dance club during the day?
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 20:44 CST
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but what about her scars? didnt anyone notice? or was she wearing a long sleeved bathing suit? and do they even have those? this is just like elimidate. great show... really slutty girls though.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:08 CST
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAAAAAAYYYY!!!!good chapter, kikyo so deserved the busting...lol! awesome.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:49 CST
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WOOOOHOOO!!!! i definitely like this story. and i just threw your theory of wanting something and not getting it, out the wondow.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:37 CST
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKK!!!! I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN I WIN!!!!!THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!^________^
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:27 CST
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so does that mean that since i especially want it to be inu'kag, it's not going to be? *Drops good luck pose*...damn, that pose never seems to work...
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 18:20 CST
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*still holding good luck pose* please let it be inu/kag, please let it be inu/kag, please let it be inu/kag... still awesome. can kikyou die? i'm not a fan of her either.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:58 CST
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*Crosses fingers, and chants her good luck mantra* please let it be in/kag!!! awesome otherwise.
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:52 CST
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hang on...is this inu/kag? i really really really hope it is... if it isnt, i'll be sad, but probably try to stick with it. it's good!
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:48 CST
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oooh la la!!! is it inuyasha? still only on chapter 2... should probably wait till i finish the chap til i start reviewing...
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Reviewed By: Tanwen-Whitefire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 17:44 CST
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i kinda like it... only on chapter one so far, but hey! it's looking good.
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Title: ummm...
Reviewed By: inuyasha's girl On: November 21, 2004 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! my head hurts from waiting for you to update! hurry up before my brain blows up!
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Reviewed By: xpinaysweetnessx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 17:47 CDT
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your story is really cool one of the best i ever read. hope u can update ur story
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Reviewed By: cravin for you On: October 09, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good i praticly die waitin for chapters please continue oh yeah good luck rasin money
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