"My Other Life" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ›  » ] |
Reviewed By: boredgrl On: July 29, 2004 19:10 CDT Comment/Review: ok well on chapter i think 4 or 3 kagome hurt her ribs and after that u didn't mention it, just a little mistake, but i'm still reading it so...stil good job on it
|
Title: Awesome! Reviewed By: Katana14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 23:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is great! But I wish that you would update a little more. Cause it's really good. It's one of the stories that interesting from start to finish. Please write more, if you can. Like once a week or something. I'd be happy with that. And a lot of others would be too!
|
Title: ^-^ Reviewed By: Guilty On: July 28, 2004 21:44 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YAY! You updated! Stupid computer! It deleted your 12 pages! Oh well update soon!
|
Title: wow great chappy i dont kno how u people do it!!! Reviewed By: InuYashasLovelorn (not signed in) On: July 28, 2004 17:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omfg that was good keep up the good work update soon please? i need to read what happens!!!!! ^_^ it's getting all too good!!!! ^_^ keep up the good work and upsate update update update update soon please?
|
Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 17:24 CDT Comment/Review: yay!!!...another good chapter!!...i espcially liked this one ^-^..the ending was so cute when she rubbed his ears and the last part with miroku and sango! hehehehehe...im so happy! gives me a tingly feeling ^^ lol...ok update again!
|
Reviewed By: kitkat2919 (nli) On: July 28, 2004 16:12 CDT Comment/Review: Goody! Another chappy! It's wonderful how she does that! >=3 eliminate some one! Eliminate Kagura! Oh, and we all understand about the chapter thing **nods** just keep up the good work!
|
Title: wow Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 13:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omfg keep up the good work!!! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: July 22, 2004 16:40 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG those bitches that was so mean of her both Kikyo and Kagura. This is a really good story I have to find out how it ends
|
Reviewed By: Guilty4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 23:27 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WHERE ARE YOU! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOoooooooooOOOOOooooooooon!
|
Title: my other life Reviewed By: melannie On: July 19, 2004 14:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! i am in suspense I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!! put kagome and inu back together!!!!!!! AHHHHHH i hope u update really reallly soooooon! the story my other life was great!!!
|
Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 17:47 CDT Comment/Review: ....noooo! y did yu have to make inuyasha not trust her anymore?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?? awesome chapter tho!!! and i cant believe inuyasha liked kikyou's kiss!!!!!!!!! argh thats so wrong!!!! anyway update soon!!!
|
Title: inuluvher151 Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 17, 2004 02:11 CDT Comment/Review: hey great chapter I can't believe inuyasha what a jerk but then kikyo's a caknifing like twit. so yeah can't wait to find out kagome's plan and how inuyasha reacts to miroku's confession.
|
Title: UPDATE A.S.A.P! Reviewed By: SilverFangz On: July 16, 2004 23:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update soon! I LOVE THIS FIC! INU/KAG ALL THE WAY! DEATH TO KIKYO!
|
Reviewed By: LIL ANGEWL On: July 16, 2004 15:10 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YOU TAKE TO LONG TO UPDATE.BUT GOOD WORK!
|
Reviewed By: SaeChan On: July 16, 2004 02:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a really good story and i can't wait til you continue it ^^
|
Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 ›  » ] |