| "An Actual Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: sex
Reviewed By: Relyt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
i want some of that ball action misty i want to fuck o yeah boobs and suxing balls i do both i sux my own balls
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Reviewed By: Fredicus On: July 28, 2005 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude u totally need a kitchen scene!! play w/ food n such, surely u gt whipped cream in the minibar eh? ~~Frm da chick named Fred!~~
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: December 13, 2004 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHA dude that was fuckin sweet man best pokemon fic I've read in awhile
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good lemon. It is hard to find a lemon on this site. If u like lemons, u should go read my inuyasha story. It has a couple of lemony chapters. Overall this is a realy good lemon. Good job. Ma petite
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. Keep those chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: PurpleNeko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story! keep on adding chapters ( I think I know what's coming next) a little rushed I'm afraid to say add a little more description to make the readers horny while they read it and to make the story more enjoyable! good luck keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: swiss miss On: August 02, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's alright, a little rushed at the end, but i'm sure you can do better. maybe add some more description, a little background to show how they got where they are now. if you're planning to turn this into a story, and it sounds like you are, then these are just a few suggestions i have for you. ^_~ looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Good one
Reviewed By: Wildfire1979 On: July 17, 2004 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. There were a few typoes but nothing serious. I put the 8 in creativity because I want to challange you to make something even better. I did like the Ash and Misty pairing as well. Good work, keep it up.
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Kinshin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 12:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read the Sequel!!! You must continue really really soon
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Reviewed By: Nikhil On: July 10, 2004 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice. Can't wait for the sequel!
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol
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Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: Lady_yuna_Star On: June 29, 2004 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very excellent! I can't wait til the sequel!
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Title: Lemony Fresh
Reviewed By: dragonmaster86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I loved this fic! Please continue with a sequel!
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