| "Kagome's Return (sequel to Kagome! Where are you!?" Reviews/Comments [ 215 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: January 25, 2008 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly love your stories! they are truely amazing. i was wondering though. you said that there was a story about inuyasha's and kagome's time alone but i cant seem to find it im so glad that i found all of thses stories. you are a great writer keep it up!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 17:07 CST
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No no no non on bull fucking shit she belongs with sesshy
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 21:50 CST
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I am supposed to get off the computer in a few minutes but I have to say this right now. Inuyasha has his moments of pure stupidity. Seriously he does. I haven't finished reading chapter 17 just the beginning of it. Even then he is an idiot. In my mind I make up stories which makes me feel pretty crazy. But anyways... my story character males would give up anything for the females that they love. Willingly. They don't even miss it much. I don't like to much conflicts in my stories. They have to be perfect. Well not exactly perfect something goes wrong. But still my point is they would sacrafice for the one they loved.Even if they died in my story they would have their moments of happiness. Pure and untaintable. P.S. Inuyasha is an idiot. She should've just been with Sesshou
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Title: Fingerprints
Reviewed By: Tigeris On: September 01, 2006 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just thought I would point out a mistake on Kagome's part. Though I can't blame her for being paranoid. Police probably wouldnt lift fingerprints in the case of a dead horse. It is not a dead person, and would therefore not be an important enough crime for the police to spend that much time and money on the case. Also money has MANY different peoples fingerprints on it, so how could they determine which prints belonged to the horse killer? Also, it is highly doubtful that the police would check a japaneese data base for fingerprints. As far as I know, the police only have prints for people in the US. (not positive on that last part)
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 (not logged in) On: March 06, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good and I think I will have to read the follow up stories to it. when and if they are out
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Reviewed By: SilentPredator [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 12:24 CST
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Not as much going on in this one. I'm not sure why you decided to split these stories up. They could've easily been one story. Sango seems a little... different in this story then what I'm used to seeing. Maybe that's because I haven't read any of the other stories yet?
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 10:23 CDT
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great story
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Reviewed By: InusGirlD [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 10:10 CST
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I LOVED this fanfic! I've spent a good portion of my weekend reading your fanfics (about 3-7 on friday and 8am-3am on saturday with an hour break) - you really got me hookeed :D I'm glad that Goddess of Japan is already written :) - I'll have to read it later though or else my homework will never get done (lool) Anywhoo - keep up the great work :D
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(not signed in) On: January 20, 2005 19:00 CST
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well... I think you could've made the meeting with Inuyasha and Kagome and Sesshomaru more interesting... This one was a little boring, but otherwise, it was okay.
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Title: I LOVED IT!!!
Reviewed By: Melli (also WitchyTeen14) On: September 21, 2004 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeffs, I swear you wrote the best Kagome/Sesshomaru fic I have ever read. I'm gunna continue to read your other fics. THIS FIC WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!! I might even read it again!!!! :P
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Title: omg omg omg omg
Reviewed By: Rhi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
xcpmdfh...>.< omg..Your leaving us for 2 WEEKS!omg...**freaks out* thats so mean! omfg...;__; Well hey at least theres going to be "Kagome goddess of Japan" That I know Im going to enjoy **squeels** But its going to be hard for two wweks. Your so meaannnn. >//////<
I cant wait till the new fic comes out xox Rhi oxo
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 18:06 CDT
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Oh fantastic job. The update was great I'm really looking forward to Kagome being a goddess, and the story line when Sesshomaru takes the crown (uh leadership) from his mother! Awsome!
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Reviewed By: td On: August 30, 2004 15:36 CDT
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Is shippo interested in girls yet or does he still think of tem as friends and does not understand loe.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 30, 2004 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, that was a big mistake by Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru. Such a move would bring in a Black Box team of which concern is success and making it look accidental. Sometimes they kill themselves to kill the target.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 14:46 CDT
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cools beans. Keep up the great work Jeff.
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