| "Kagome's Return (sequel to Kagome! Where are you!?" Reviews/Comments [ 215 ] |
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:40 CDT
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Good chapter ^_^ At least the girls are getting their "bitch-fest" straightened out. And the part where Sessho never thought of the connection with Kagome as Kikyo's reincarnation. I look forward to the next chapter to see what the girls do.
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Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: August 01, 2004 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good movie would be Millenium Actress to illustrate the point. Semper Fidelis
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Reviewed By: Mr. Review On: August 01, 2004 12:03 CDT
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I love your story. I have read every chapter from the beginning to the sequel. Your writing style and ideas are like none I have seen so far. That said, I must ask if this is still a sess/kag romance? If this damages the plot than you don't have to answer. But that is one of the reasons I started to read this story. From what I have read It seems as though Kagome cannot let go of inuyasha while sesshoumaru has political issues. I just want to know what I'm reading and if it does not go my way I will continue to read. I thank you for reading this and hope to get a response.
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Reviewed By: the scarlet pimpernel On: July 31, 2004 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent!A little weird with Sango and Miroko becoming brother and sister because of the fact that kagome's mom had never met Sango or Miroku and i don't think Miroku and Sango wouldn't be comfortable calling each other brother and sister considering they want to get married but hey maybe that didn't matter as much back in the feudal era.
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Reviewed By: Amber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 19:47 CDT
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ok let me say i love this story you seem to miss a few words though but thats mino you are very talented kikyo is a bitch through and through after reading these two stories im gunna have to say that sess should get kagome in the end i love yasha but in this story they dont fit aswell as sess and kag the journeys you have put us all on are magnificant and i wish i had an imagination as vast as yours thank you for bringing me on such a great adventure and please continue soon
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 17:41 CDT
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I am enjoying this story very much. I hope that you update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Rhi-chan On: July 29, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!! IF YOU DONT WRITE/UPDATE SOOON...IM GOING TO CRY...I THINK I AM GOING TO CRY.YOUR SOOO EVIL FOR DOING THIS TO YOUR DEVOTED FANS (LIKE ME.)OMFG! IVE READ THE CUBE AND JUST NOW FINISHING 'KAGOMES RETURN' ...YOOOUU HAATTTEE USSSSS.....OMFG!!! ::CRIES:: THIS..IS LIKE MY MOST (WELL ONE OF THEM)FAVORITE STORIES I HAVE EVER READ.OMFG! THIS IS THE MOST WORSTEST CLIFFHANGER I HAVE EVER LANDED ON!(I AM NOT YELLING,I LIKE TO TYPE IN CAPS) WELL...I KNOW I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE REST OF THE CHAPTERS...AND I I WILL LOVE YOU FOR IT,WHEN THEY COME!!! IF YOU WISH TO E-MAIL ME BACK IM AT EIRIYUKI99@AOL.COM OR TATSUHAUESUGI99@AOL.COM.. WELL I WILL REVIEW WHEN THE STORY IS COMPLETLY DONE!! ::CRIES:: OMFG I CANT WAIT FOR IT!
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Reviewed By: snowcataff On: July 28, 2004 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please feel highly regarded by my giving you "nines", as I would regard Shakepeare, JRRTolkien, maybe Stephen King (etc.) as 10's. So yeah I finally caught up! and thanks for the reply I had two chapters left to go.. the one thing I didn't get to say, because I was limited on time, was my thoughts about grandpa's decision to stay dead, to "die as a man". I am disappointed when men, generally, don't stop to think that being a male presence in raising children is more important than they think to the success of their family! I pitied Sota. Will be waitng for you to resume in Aug. Thanks jeffs for your entertaining stories!
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Title: Evil Cliffhanger
Reviewed By: x_inuyasha_forever_x On: July 24, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg that was a good cliffhanger, i love this story and can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 01:53 CDT
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ROFLMAO ... eeeeeeeeevil cliff-hanger!!! ^_~ But worth the read and I'm sure it will be worth the wait till you update ^_^
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Reviewed By: the scarlet pimpernel On: July 21, 2004 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe this isn't the greatest way to start this off but what the hell. I think you are a great writer but could you pleeeeeeeeease pick up the pace a little! Your story is so intriguing it keeps me on the edge and i also like how accurate you kept Kagome and Sesshoumaru despite the unlikelyhood of the whole situation with a cube that sends you to different worlds and the fact that two seperate gods cared so much about the lives of the pair. You are very creative keep up the story as quickly as possible.Thanks.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: lazerbeam12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing skills never cease to amaze me. You have real talent, you know that? Keep up the good work. Remember, If you write it, we will read.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: KillerLove390 On: July 20, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story as well as kagome! where are you?! and i just cant get enough of them!!! i cant wait until you continue to the next chapter! keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 22:15 CDT
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Great chapter. Evil cliffie but I can understand. Hope you get the rest you need to come back and write some more good stories.
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Title: veeery nice
Reviewed By: Great cliffhanger....grr On: July 19, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UM..nothing intelligent to say yet. WOW isn't intelligent is it? Nah, didn't think so. One thing continues to piss me off though. WHY DO YOU KEEP ASSUMING SOMETHING'S "WRONG"? HUH? Nobody is pefect, but, as far as I can see, you have made the least mistakes of any author I've read. Your story is extremely entertaining (if not time consuming) and I'm so glad you continued to write it. Throughout this whole thing you've been a very dependable author and never failed to put out good...stuff. Congratulations on pulling off such an intricate plot and not looking like a total dumbass as well. Very nice. I eagerly await Inuyasha's decision (I think he needs to go...but surprise me). Oh yeah...and yay.
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