Title: hm...
Reviewed By: Lady_Yuna_Star On: June 29, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good. THe sex scene should've been more detailed. Work on your spelling and grammer more. Very good over all. Very original.
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