| "Together at Last: Aisha and Jim" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: sweet
Reviewed By: dragonmaster43434 On: October 21, 2004 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kick ass story could you write another anut aisha and jim?
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Reviewed By: cloud9Kerri [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one pairing I never would have imagined in a 1000 years but you really made it work! I enjoyed the more mature Jim and the fact that you stayed true to the fact that Melfina is an android and therefor any children she and gene would have would likely be adopted. I also cried laughing when Jim was weighing the cost of the "Kevlar Bedding" if Aisha stuck around for very long. You did a superb job of meshing humor, romance, sex and song all together in the great one shot!
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Reviewed By: Sarsa On: July 04, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, very belivable. i really liked the detail you described the characters with. Write more good stuff like this. You should do one around Fred. Sara
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Reviewed By: breakaway_republic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! This fic really is something else. Somewhat angst-ey, but overall I'd have to say very well done. My favorite 'odd couple'. At long last, Aisha and Jim get their moment in the sun thanks to your muse!
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can tell what i feel about this fic in three simple words: I loved it.
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