Title: nice. Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 16:19 CDT Comment/Review: I liked it! Wee, I'm the first one to reveiw! niiice. I really liked it, and you shoudl acually make a sequal, or make some more chapters, where Vegeta gets a little closer to these words: 'kay, I'll admit it, I can't live without the woman.' . A if he would ever say them,, but then he should think them at least. :P. I love your writing style, and I loved this little story. keep it up. :)
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