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| "Divine Intervention" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would LOVE it if the story mainly circled around Akane and Ranma (or other couples, as long as Ranma and kane weren't with anyone else. I'm a strong fan of them. which, by the way, means I'm glad ryoga wasn't up to par with Akane in the last chapter). It's a really funny story in all. :) Interesting idea. Love it all. I can't wait till you add to it! :) sincerely, seacil
| Reviewed By: Morisato [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit. This fic was really good. There were some typos and misspellings, but everything else was good. The first chapter was great, and while I was worried about major OOC'isms during the other chapters, those worries were put to rest through considerate explanations. Overall, this was a great story. There was even good humor in it as well, and the lemon was nicely written. I just hope that you can continue with this good progress in your later chapters, and not mess up like most lemon authors do (ie: start off with a good story, and then ruin it with major OOC'ism and bad writing). Anyways, I look forward to reading future chapters. Perhaps Happosai can pair up either Ryoga with Ukyo (or Akari), or Sasuke with anyone of your choice (even an original character). I dunno, it's your choice.
| Title: The M Word
Reviewed By: j0 On: June 20, 2004 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes! MORE chapters! MOOOORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! I likey! Please, please write MORE!
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