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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 06:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update again soon. Can't wait to see if all of the SD goes with Kagome. How Inuyasha reacts to Kagome being mated to Hiei.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 16:57 CST
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update! bring on the chaos^^
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 18:56 CST
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Well, again as I stated before it just seems to missing pieces. I like your story and all, but it seems strange to me as to why Hiei is out of character... I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'d understand but there\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s nothing to back up his change in character. Other than that there seems be some grammer problems.. for instance \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"Oh and guy\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s I have one more thing to tell you. Also I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m a demon.\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"... with this there\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s no need to use also. Your story has potential but it does need work. As I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'ve said its moving along really fast and I\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'m still unclear as to how Kagome is a demon, and their relationship seems unexpected,I hope to see more of this story.
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Reviewed By: blackshadowz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 18:35 CST
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I think that your story has a good qualities to it but it's just fast paced. In one chapter, Kagome and Hiei meet, fight,have sex and fall in love. Then there's Kagome being a demon. There are several missing pieces to it already. I hope you dont take this the wrong way, I'm trying to be constructive and will continue reading were I left.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 20:48 CDT
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I agree with Karama, except that Kagome joins and gets hurt and then Hiei like gets really pissed and does whatever he can to stop her from going on another mission. But then a lemon in like a "I thought I lost you" thing. Then they go on another mission and she gets hurt and then Hiei finds out that she was hurt while being with child! DUn Dun DUn!Love our story, update soon!Bye!WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can\\\\\\\'t wait to see if the YUYU gang meets the INU gang and what happens when Inuyasha finds Kagome mated to Hiei.
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Reviewed By: rocknroll7806 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 18:45 CST
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very cute! keep it up
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Reviewed By: Kita the Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really into the story...but i want u to update PLZ!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 11:49 CST
Comment/Review:
this is one of the most pithitic fics i hav ever read.
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done.(^_~)
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I love it!!!!!!!!!!! YES YES YES I WANT MORE LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like a lemon and also Y doent Inuyasha come in and try to kill Kagome becuz of Kikyo and also does Naraku still alive?????????????????
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Title: forgot
Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Karama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 13:15 CDT
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1)how 'bout kag join the SD team. hiei is opposed to the idea, but gives in eventuly. 2)a few missions, 3)a few lemons, 4)kagome gets pregnent, SEQUAL PLEASE
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story it was getting really intereating and i want to u to update A.S.A.P PLEASE
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