Reviewed By: Evanscent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised that this is the first review. Are there really no others? Were they deleted? Anyhow... I really did enjoy this story. The overall plot was well worked, the twists planned and well-executed. My only complaint was that the story was somehow bland. The emotions were perhaps too predictable, somehow too easily read. I am not saying that this is your fault as an author, it is your particular style, and it should remain as so. It's only my personal opinion of the text. It contained everything a good story needed: death, pain, suffering, resistance and the usurping of evil. It was just... typical, I suppose. I hate using that word, though. Your story's not typical, only the indredients. I do enjoy the fact you've celebrated change and open minds in your story. Too many times have authors stuck with one pairing/companion for the characters and have left them that way, myself included. I'd hate to leave you with the impression I thought your story mediocre, which it wasn't. I appolgize if I had. Please, do continue to write, and I'll look forward to reading. You do wonderful work and have an excellent grasp of the language and emotion you want to share. Best wishes to you! -Keely Evanscent
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