| "Mirage" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lyric On: February 14, 2005 15:18 CST
Comment/Review:
You should keep writing. Pwease...preety pwease if you don't im gonna cry ::sniff::sniff:: Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Sarra_00 On: June 24, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story idea and what you've written so far. You are aware that Q chan is D's grandfather arn't you, so he sould have some idea of Leon's place in D's life. You may want to consider this before you write anything more and think about when exactly your story is set.
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: June 21, 2004 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
poor leon - and granddaddy getting jealous - nice chapter and hope that we don't wait too long for the next one
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: June 21, 2004 14:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
intresting start
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Reviewed By: rilo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could kiss you right now.. Finally, someone else who writes about the Elder D's! And Sofu/Leon has always been a pairing I've wanted to see... please, write more!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: June 19, 2004 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice, very nice. keep it coming there aren't enough PSOH fics in this world. Keep up the good work. A rose for you @---^--
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