| "Hurt" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Aiso-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 00:39 CDT
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I would really love to read the sequal very much. This was a really great story.
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Title: hurt
Reviewed By: Aiso-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this I would Love to know what happened next to this story. I hope you don't just end it here. This story made me really feel for the characters and made me want to know what'll happen next. This is deffinatly one of my favorite. Hope you write more to this story.
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Reviewed By: chunli On: November 28, 2005 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I just read this and your AU/X2/SGU fics too. I really hope you would continue this. Let us know at kakairu, ^_^
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Reviewed By: Slothful On: November 24, 2005 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, really nice, two of my favourite characters in the whole Naruto series. What I really appriaciated was that Naruto's love for Iruka, is platonic and heart-warming, there was ntg gross (I can't stand student/teacher sexual realtionships). Anyway, a sequel would be great because, it can show, how Naruto would repay Iruka for his kindness and love. Wil check back to see if you update!
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Reviewed By: arien On: July 09, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweetmoon, your fic was brilliantly written, the way you write is like honey for my brain, it was easy to understand (you don't know how rare that is for me to find these days)i thank you for writing this wonderfully angsty fic, it was fanastic, please, i'm begging you write more. P.S when you update, if it's not too much trouble could you e-mail me at sasuke_kun1@hotmail.com much appreciated ja'e
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Reviewed By: Dvana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 14:19 CST
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Lovely story. ^^ I would love to read more. Grammar is actually pretty good and the plot is engaging. Feels a bit rished, but that's not really a bad thing in fanfiction. Characterization is solid. Only thing I would change is draw out the scene in Naruto's head, make it moer dramatic. ^^ Nice work.
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Reviewed By: dvana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely story. ^^ I would love to read more. Grammar is actually pretty good and the plot is engaging. Feels a bit rished, but that's not really a bad thing in fanfiction. Characterization is solid. Only thing I would change is draw out the scene in Naruto's head, make it moer dramatic. ^^ Nice work.
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Reviewed By: StrawberrytNoodleBunny On: September 12, 2004 22:46 CDT
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Ooo!! I've never seen one like this before! Such an interesting concept! You should really write more. Do you have this on FF.net? I don't think they would kick it off. You'd get a lot more reviews there. Or AFF.net. anyway! More plez!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 17:37 CDT
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i absolutely loved this fic. please write more like it ^_^
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Title: Hypervelocity
Reviewed By: SDI On: July 11, 2004 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, it was completely original. Great job, keep it up!
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Title: Hypervelocity
Reviewed By: SDI On: July 11, 2004 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, it was completely original. Great job, keep it up!
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Title: shake_it_buddy
Reviewed By: shake_it_buddy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grabs you by your shirt and roars into your face*: MOOOOOOOOREEEEEE!!! pretty please? ^.^
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:02 CDT
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Awesome, I loved it. It's too bad that this was a one-shot, I would have loved to read more.
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Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 20:10 CDT
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Very intense. Loved how you put us in Naruto's head. cdk
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