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"Ryou's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ]
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 Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2005 07:22 CST
Comment/Review:
*bows down* you are the supreme write of my farorites list (only one on my list but that doesn't matter) I really love this fic and I wish you would update if you had time/interest I think that Bakura should wear black ^-^
 Title: its meh...again...
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi Hi HI~! This chapter was wonderful^_^...but ...but...why!? Why did Malik have to die? ok...so he was a real dickwad... >.>but still... U_U; Anyway~!! I like how you made Anzu kinda outta character. You actually made her pretty decent! *appaluds* *waves BXR banner* I cant wait for the next installment!
 Title: lemme try this again...^^;
Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I heart YOU! You updated! 2X even! I cant wait to read the next capter! Youll hear from me again in a few minutes. :3 Are there gonna be any more scenes that involve Bakura's favorite blade? (which is now MY favorite too xD)
 Reviewed By: Forgotten Sunrise [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 16, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I >
 Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2005 08:22 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
continue soon. I think Ryou should wear white and Bakura wear black.
 Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2005 00:00 CST
Comment/Review:
AH MY GOD! YOU KILLED HIM! HE'S DEAD! [Clutches Malik's corpse] And Marik doesn't even care! [weep weep] WHY!?
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 02, 2005 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
O_O Y-you killed Hikari-pretty... and even though Bakura probably knows tons of odd and sadistic and quick ways to kill ppl, I highly doubt that he could rip out a heart w/ his bare hands. And ur evil, making readers wait to find out Ryou's horrible secret!! Is it super-bad, like hooker stuff? And Bakura's suit should be... black, so then the blood doesn't show up as easily. I think he'd just look weird in white... with blood stains. That inspires me for fanart...ja ne!
 Reviewed By: slacker17  On: February 01, 2005 11:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Black and red
 Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in)  On: January 31, 2005 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, and one more thing. Bakura should wear black, cuz he's looks great in that color. Once again, well written chapters. See ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in)  On: January 31, 2005 23:25 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Why oh why did Marik and Malik have to do that, my 2nd and third fav. bishonens betrayed my two top favs! *sobs* I guess I'll live with it. lol. Anyways, I loved both chapters. But so evil, Ryou's secret is still kept hidden to the readers. You have one great mom, that also write very well. ^_^ I also praise you for making Anzu quite likeable in the story. I'm very glad they're together again, now they can f*** each other senseless again. lol. Me and my hentai ideas. ^_^; But I'm not the only one. lol. Write more soon, see ya. ^_~
 Reviewed By: paniwi (not logged in)  On: January 31, 2005 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
YOU AND YOUR MUM ARE EVIL Now I still don't know what Ryou's secret is, grr. Your lucky with a mum like yours though. Ok on with what is supposed to be constructive criticism (I suck in that) It was a beautiful chapter, with good characterasations (so much for criticism ne?) and I think Baku-chan should where a red suit, so he can use it later cause the blood that undoubtley will come on it won't be noticed that much ^_^ anyway, plz update soon
 Reviewed By: PROTOTYPE Uber Rei Model 00 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2005 15:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved it--angsty goodness!
 Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 26, 2005 14:40 CST
Comment/Review:
T_T Nooooooo... m-my other 2 fave b-bishonens... HOW COULD THEY BETRAY BAKU AND RYOU-CHAN?!?! This totally goes beyond the Code of the Bishonen... *sobs in a corner, then coughs* Ahem, anyway, how can they have a 2nd 1st date when they've never really been on a date... haven't they? Hmm... well, cya!
 Reviewed By: anbuiset(to lazy to log in)  On: January 25, 2005 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this soo much, don`t let Marik and Malik keep them apart. I love Ryou/Bakura.
 Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess suffers from laziness  On: January 25, 2005 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
OOoh.. not boring, I like gore! ^^ Second first date sounds good. =3. Update soon please.
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